A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "A Love So Dear"Assorted poems of love
35 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. The presentation is great--the color scheme, the artwork, your format, and the way you expressed your feelings with well chosen words. Good job on the flow of lines. It reads nicely with a great message. Good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. The presentation is great--the color scheme, the artwork, your format, and the way you expressed your feelings with well chosen words. Good job on the flow of lines. It reads nicely with a great message. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Hi, JP, thanks once again for a lovely review of my work. Yours is a name I have come to look for here. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Louise Michelle
Such a lovely and inspiring poem. How lucky we are when there is someone in our life who loves unconditionally and reminds us that we are important. I think you did a good job capturing this sentiment. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Such a lovely and inspiring poem. How lucky we are when there is someone in our life who loves unconditionally and reminds us that we are important. I think you did a good job capturing this sentiment. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Louise, may I call you Louise?This is a lovely review from such a well-rounded writer. I am humbled that you saw fit to read and review my work.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Love is both a blessing and a curse. we can't live with or without it.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Love is both a blessing and a curse. we can't live with or without it.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Absolutely true, Tomes. Heartbreak is sometimes a part of love. We have all felt it I am sure.
Thank you for this splendid review :)
Always,
Missy
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Very true.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, some lucky person is hearing those words, simple words, that in reality are the offering every person on this earth waits to hear. Those little simple somethings, whispered in our ears. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Yes, some lucky person is hearing those words, simple words, that in reality are the offering every person on this earth waits to hear. Those little simple somethings, whispered in our ears. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Smiling at you, Ric.
I believe in the love game you would be dangerous :)
Thanks for the oh so dear, review!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Ulla
This a another lovely poem of yours and so beautiful words used. I have no more six left and it would have been yours. Well done Missy. All best. Ulla
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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This a another lovely poem of yours and so beautiful words used. I have no more six left and it would have been yours. Well done Missy. All best. Ulla
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I will gladly accept the virtual one, Ulla. It was in your heart to give that is where it counts for me.
Always,
Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
What a sweet poem, I love how you captured the meaning a person can bring to another. How just one person can fill an empty void and make a lonely person feel as if they were the center of the universe. Great poem.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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What a sweet poem, I love how you captured the meaning a person can bring to another. How just one person can fill an empty void and make a lonely person feel as if they were the center of the universe. Great poem.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I am smiling now, sweetie! This review is just perfect, thank you!
Always,
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a wonderful poem, Missy. I enjoyed it so much. It is worth a six star rating if I had one to give you. Your words apply to any reader with the hope of being so fortunate. These lines are especially nice:
"How do I thank someone for giving meaning to my life?
For lighting a candle in the darkness of my existence?" Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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This is a wonderful poem, Missy. I enjoyed it so much. It is worth a six star rating if I had one to give you. Your words apply to any reader with the hope of being so fortunate. These lines are especially nice:
"How do I thank someone for giving meaning to my life?
For lighting a candle in the darkness of my existence?" Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I will lovingly accept that virtual 6 and be delighted :)
Thank you ever so much Marilyn!!
Always,
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Bravo Missy! Clap, clap, clap!!! :)
You're words have such true meaning. I feel that one small kind word from another person can change you're whole perspective in life. Sometimes we are just hanging by a thread and someone comes along and says just the right thing that we so desperately need to hear.
Your writing creates so much heartfelt emotions that truly brings joy to my day. Thank you for sharing such wonderful creations. It makes a difference.
Shana :)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Bravo Missy! Clap, clap, clap!!! :)
You're words have such true meaning. I feel that one small kind word from another person can change you're whole perspective in life. Sometimes we are just hanging by a thread and someone comes along and says just the right thing that we so desperately need to hear.
Your writing creates so much heartfelt emotions that truly brings joy to my day. Thank you for sharing such wonderful creations. It makes a difference.
Shana :)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Shana, you are a delight to this ol girl. :)
Thank you ever so much for being such a wonderful friend. I truly appreciate you, sweetie ♥
Always,
Missy
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You're so welcome! :)
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Lovely words and thoughts, Missy. Most of your poetry centers on the many facets of love. I believe it's become your specialty.
"How do I thank someone for giving meaning to my life?
For lighting a candle in the darkness of my existence?"
Love carries us through the very worst life has to dole out. Your poetry is always hopeful and sometimes, a bit mysterious. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Lovely words and thoughts, Missy. Most of your poetry centers on the many facets of love. I believe it's become your specialty.
"How do I thank someone for giving meaning to my life?
For lighting a candle in the darkness of my existence?"
Love carries us through the very worst life has to dole out. Your poetry is always hopeful and sometimes, a bit mysterious. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I have so many emotions, but I feel love most often. It is a burden at times when my love is left hanging!
Thank you, GLG for always being here for me :)
Missy
Comment from Pantygynt
The three words with wich you conclude this poem are probably the most beautiful in the language and when augmented by "will always" become the most oft broken promise of all time.
But we must live, as this poem does, in the present even when it harks back to a time before the love in question was known. At that point the earlier part of the poem the language used is simple and almost prosaic. The poetry kicks in with the love in the last three stanzas. these are beautifully expressed.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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The three words with wich you conclude this poem are probably the most beautiful in the language and when augmented by "will always" become the most oft broken promise of all time.
But we must live, as this poem does, in the present even when it harks back to a time before the love in question was known. At that point the earlier part of the poem the language used is simple and almost prosaic. The poetry kicks in with the love in the last three stanzas. these are beautifully expressed.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Gynt for this lovely review.
Confession here. You make me break out my dictionary more than anyone here in FS...lol. I had to look up "prosaic" Not a word I use often...omg scratch that, NEVER. I am glad that you read on and found something beautiful in my words :)
Always,
Missy
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I liked the contrast.
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I am smiling :)