Comment from robyn corum

Good

This poem definitely meets the criteria of the contest. If I could offer any constructive suggestions it might be to try writing the poem in all lowercase to smooooooth the reading and help the flow...?

Just a thought. Good luck!

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

Okay, thank you :)

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Good Advice! LOL

Me. . .I'm goin' straight for the head bash. . .followed quickly by decapitation! Then cremation.
If the apocalypse comes. . .I'm going straight to the farm & garden to stock up on machetes!! And then to the "Security R Us" store. . .for padded body wear!!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

LOL It sounds like you have a good plan for the Zombie Apocalypse LOL Thank you very much for the review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I don't like zombies. Your picture is creepy but effective:) Great entry for the contest. Best of luck to you in it.
teresa

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

Thank you Teresa. I appreciate your review.