Demon Seed With Interest
100 word horror28 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Mikey, you are a real gem! Only you would think of something this bizarre and hilarious. Trump is an idiot and let's hope people realize it before he's in the white house .... now THAT would be true Hell. :)
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LOL! Mikey, you are a real gem! Only you would think of something this bizarre and hilarious. Trump is an idiot and let's hope people realize it before he's in the white house .... now THAT would be true Hell. :)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Michael,
~Demon Seed With Interest~ LOL scary in a funny way, well, not scary at all. Good job in keeping the story at 100 words.
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Hello Michael,
~Demon Seed With Interest~ LOL scary in a funny way, well, not scary at all. Good job in keeping the story at 100 words.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from Amy Greta
Horrifying satire, very clever. I was confused until I saw the second picture, and then the "ah ha" moment. It is also a story of fear with the alien looking child. The tone was nicely set in the first line "...not mine, thank God."
Very original and creative piece!
Amy
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Horrifying satire, very clever. I was confused until I saw the second picture, and then the "ah ha" moment. It is also a story of fear with the alien looking child. The tone was nicely set in the first line "...not mine, thank God."
Very original and creative piece!
Amy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from Michaelk
Wow! You had me twisted all around with this story. At first I thought a child was being a ducted, then I thought there was a horrible monster about to be unleashed. The ending made laugh, which is a twist for a horror story.
I liked the Brad Pitt reference, but I didn't get it until after I had read through.
Well written. The tension built throughout. With a funny payoff.
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Wow! You had me twisted all around with this story. At first I thought a child was being a ducted, then I thought there was a horrible monster about to be unleashed. The ending made laugh, which is a twist for a horror story.
I liked the Brad Pitt reference, but I didn't get it until after I had read through.
Well written. The tension built throughout. With a funny payoff.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. I think Humpwhistle is going to blow a gasket when he sees this as he has made it pretty clear in his entry that humor has no place in the realm of terror LOL - I thought it well done. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. I think Humpwhistle is going to blow a gasket when he sees this as he has made it pretty clear in his entry that humor has no place in the realm of terror LOL - I thought it well done. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from trimple
Hey, Mikey
A fine piece of writing, but without the picture of the lovely Mr.Trump, with respect I feel that your shorty is a little flat :(
Sorry hun, but I didn't get the goolies reading this.
With the pic though, you hit my funny bone :)
much love
tracey
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Hey, Mikey
A fine piece of writing, but without the picture of the lovely Mr.Trump, with respect I feel that your shorty is a little flat :(
Sorry hun, but I didn't get the goolies reading this.
With the pic though, you hit my funny bone :)
much love
tracey
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from krys123
Mikey;
-any baby that would look like Donald Trump sure would be a horror to the mother.
-Your writing is very descriptive and vividly expressive throughout.
-Good enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concept from one stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
-I like to take on Rosemary's baby which was very effective in the movies and now excellently effective hearing your poem.
-Good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
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Mikey;
-any baby that would look like Donald Trump sure would be a horror to the mother.
-Your writing is very descriptive and vividly expressive throughout.
-Good enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concept from one stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
-I like to take on Rosemary's baby which was very effective in the movies and now excellently effective hearing your poem.
-Good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from pbroussard209
Lol I guess to many having Trump as their child is horror in its worst. Great, scary yet funny story. Certainly very unexpected. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. This is a wonderful entry.
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Lol I guess to many having Trump as their child is horror in its worst. Great, scary yet funny story. Certainly very unexpected. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. This is a wonderful entry.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from sgalletti
Well, this is hilarious Mikey! It's also definitely original, and not, I imagine, what we'll see in most of the entries. You definitely have a story in the required words, and we all know what "You're Fired" means. Personally, I find the Donald quite refreshing. It's great to hear someone say what so many of us think and not listen to the same old, same old political rhetoric. Good luck in the contest. Sue
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Well, this is hilarious Mikey! It's also definitely original, and not, I imagine, what we'll see in most of the entries. You definitely have a story in the required words, and we all know what "You're Fired" means. Personally, I find the Donald quite refreshing. It's great to hear someone say what so many of us think and not listen to the same old, same old political rhetoric. Good luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
An easy target, but I think ypu have handled it as well as it will ever be handled. I did laugh and I am still laughing. It does have an underlying terror to it. Shudder.
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An easy target, but I think ypu have handled it as well as it will ever be handled. I did laugh and I am still laughing. It does have an underlying terror to it. Shudder.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015