THE MEANING of a RAINBOW
rainbow contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic for rainbow reflecting God's promise with Noah. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic for rainbow reflecting God's promise with Noah. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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You are so kind to take time to read and review my poem. I appreciate it.
Comment from Serendipity!
The arch of hope and power! How can we begin to understand but the rainbow is a tangible reminder that He is there. Have you ever thought of expanding it into a rhyming poem.
i.e.:Revealing HIS
Awesome power
(In sunshine and through showers)
In ways
Not always understood
(But always kind and good)
Bridge between Heaven and Earth
(Helping us sense our worth)
Offering hope
With everlasting life
(Promising a peace that ends all strife.
That's not at all good. I'm sure you can do better.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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The arch of hope and power! How can we begin to understand but the rainbow is a tangible reminder that He is there. Have you ever thought of expanding it into a rhyming poem.
i.e.:Revealing HIS
Awesome power
(In sunshine and through showers)
In ways
Not always understood
(But always kind and good)
Bridge between Heaven and Earth
(Helping us sense our worth)
Offering hope
With everlasting life
(Promising a peace that ends all strife.
That's not at all good. I'm sure you can do better.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your time reading and reviewing my poem. What you added is very good.
Comment from Look4depth
You've done a beautiful job overall with not only the poem, but also in it's presentation!
I noticed it was an acrostic after wondering why you chose the word with to begin the last line. Maybe you could say 'we have', but it's fine without a change too!
I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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You've done a beautiful job overall with not only the poem, but also in it's presentation!
I noticed it was an acrostic after wondering why you chose the word with to begin the last line. Maybe you could say 'we have', but it's fine without a change too!
I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and review my poem and for the suggestion. I appreciate all.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Nicely written entry for the rainbow prompt. Nice use of rainbow colors:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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Nicely written entry for the rainbow prompt. Nice use of rainbow colors:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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I appreciate your time reading & reviewing my poem. Thank you.
Comment from risktaker
The power of God is evident in all of the variations of people, landscapes, cultures,languages, and weather patterns. There is no doubt in my mind that humans are not the ultimate authority on planet earth. God is in control of the universe. Thanks.
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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The power of God is evident in all of the variations of people, landscapes, cultures,languages, and weather patterns. There is no doubt in my mind that humans are not the ultimate authority on planet earth. God is in control of the universe. Thanks.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your time reviewing my poem. Thank you, too, for your great and true comments. I appreciate everything you wrote.
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Thank you
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a very creative poem about a rainbow: to use the authentic colors of a real rainbow. I would not have noticed that this is an acrostic without your notes. I'm thinking it would be more evident if the poem were not centered. But it is very pretty as is. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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This is a very creative poem about a rainbow: to use the authentic colors of a real rainbow. I would not have noticed that this is an acrostic without your notes. I'm thinking it would be more evident if the poem were not centered. But it is very pretty as is. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking time to read and review my poem. The rules state "a poem of any kind." Since it does not have to be an acrostic, I thought centering it would be ok.
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Oh, I really didn't mean to imply that it had to be an acrostic or that centering would not be okay. The acrostic is just a little bonus you added that I thought might stand out more if the left margin were straight. I see you changed it, but of course you are free to change like it was if you like it better that way. Your choice. I'm nobody. Just giving an opinion.
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No, I like it better now that I changed it.