Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Hello Carolyn, nice alliterations used in your writing: wonders of the wind, ten-thousand turbines. Nice pairinf also of coloring and picture. Well done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Sarah for this most encouraging review.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn...

This is a really good interpretation of the power of God through the turbines. Super picture too.

Have a great day.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thank you dear lady,
Glad you enjoyed this one.
Went to the urologist again today. He found lesions in the bladder. I go for
surgery next week, removal of lesions and biopsy. He said he was confident
it was not malignant. I'm counting on that. :-) Lord willing.
Take care Jax, I hope you are doing well.
Love, Carolyn

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 30-Apr-2015

OMGoodness, my friend! You take care.

Thoughts and prayers coming your way. Let me know how you're doing after surgery. (*>*)

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful post that the author has created with this piece of work. I love looking at wind turbines. Some people don't like them and call them a blot on the landscape, but I think they are an eco-friendly way of getting power. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

We enjoy watching them as we travel. They are like turbine ranches there are so many of them.
And huge,,,,, It is a great way of creating power as you say. Harness the wind...
Thanks Tom,
Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 30-Apr-2015

Take care

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Exceptional

The picture that arises in my mind is the wind blowing gently and fills this world with a lot of hope. If there is no wind, there is no life. No air no life.
It is a great writing although short.
May the Lord look after us all.
God bless Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Dear Benny,
It seems that I can say more in fewer words these days. Remember when
you were not posting a lot of poetry. I'm kind of in that spot right now. But ,
maybe I can get caught up. In the meantime, .... short may be the key.
Hope everyone is ok over your way.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Every good and perfect gift is from above...That is a good verse for sure..But in this case one should add also that it comes from the pen of a writer... You did a great job Notes on this... few words that say so much
TK

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thank you for the great review TK,
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I love watching the turbines when we cross Oklahoma and Texas.
Hope you are having a great week,
:-) Carolyn

Comment from justjo66

Excellent

Loved the picture choice and the poem. Also, your author's notes from
James 1:17 so right on. A very enjoyable poem.
Jo

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Jo for the lovely review.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

That's putting nature to good use. We should invest more in such energy and research. Glad you named a state, it helps in creating a more definite picture in mind. Well crafted. Les

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Les,
Oklahoma and Texas are loaded with the turbines, we call them turbine ranches. The only thing
is, I haven't notice any 'little' offspring. They are huge,,,
I appreciate your fine comments.
Carolyn

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

ah yes... Oklahoma... I have roots there as well. :)
the windmill is, of course, a well known sight in Oklahoma!

I enjoyed your poem! The only thing I might change is that I don't believe ten thousand should be hyphenated.
Other than that... well done!
Cat

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Cat,
I appreciate your fine comments. I added the hyphen for emphasis. (Poetic or writers license. LOL )
Yes Oklahoma and Texas are riddled with these wonderful producers of energy.
:-) Carolyn

reply by I am Cat on 30-Apr-2015

I've gone to The Netherlands and Germany and the old old ones are there... gorgeous! and the new fangled ones (three thin blades)... all made of metal... (not as pretty but they definitely work for what they're made to do! :) I took some amazing photos of the old wooden ones... I couldn't get enough of them <3

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I wrote something and posted it this afternoon, on wind, or not, but I wrote something, Australia, by enlarge is a wondrous place for wind and sunshine, Carolyn, The Lord has blessed us with lots of "messengers". I wonder if we're listening? Beautifully written and. Presented, lovely little poem, my friend, blessings, Roy.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Roy,
God is so good, about the time we start running out of one source of energy He allows us to find another.
I appreciate your fine comments, I hope to review more tomorrow.
Love to all, Carolyn

reply by royowen on 30-Apr-2015

Most welcome, dear friend