Butterfly Butter
Just for fun:)23 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Teresa;
+ Imagery is quite distinct and clear and very exquisitely expressive and demonstratively and vividly descriptive throughout the writing as it explains how to milk a butterfly so you can have butter???
+ Enjambment is used quite well in this palm it's the running on of a thought an idea or concept from one verse, couplet or line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Poetic assessment and summary: Chuckle! Chuckle! I found this poem very humorous and actually quite funny and while reading that I was really taken in by really trying to believe in it and that it could be actually done! Chuckle! An excellent poem.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always and good luck in the contest for this is quite interesting and a good contender.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Teresa;
+ Imagery is quite distinct and clear and very exquisitely expressive and demonstratively and vividly descriptive throughout the writing as it explains how to milk a butterfly so you can have butter???
+ Enjambment is used quite well in this palm it's the running on of a thought an idea or concept from one verse, couplet or line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Poetic assessment and summary: Chuckle! Chuckle! I found this poem very humorous and actually quite funny and while reading that I was really taken in by really trying to believe in it and that it could be actually done! Chuckle! An excellent poem.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always and good luck in the contest for this is quite interesting and a good contender.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much!
Comment from pennedup
This is so unique and clever a little write about a lovely little critter.. though I don't think milking one would be a heck of a lot of fun. LOL.. Nice flow and I had a smile as well while reading.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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This is so unique and clever a little write about a lovely little critter.. though I don't think milking one would be a heck of a lot of fun. LOL.. Nice flow and I had a smile as well while reading.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much!
Comment from boxergirl
I cant believe you couldn't find a picture of someone milking a butterfly? Lol
Love the whimsical tone that it kind of flitter along while I read it. 8-)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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I cant believe you couldn't find a picture of someone milking a butterfly? Lol
Love the whimsical tone that it kind of flitter along while I read it. 8-)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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lol - I tried to find a picture - lol. Thanks so much:)
Comment from tfawcus
Well, you've milked this one for all that it's worth! Truly a bit of fairy magic at work here! I've heard of putting buttercups under the chin to see if you like butter and my grandfather had a wonderful way of describing small things, as being no bigger than a bee's gaiter button! Keep on churning them out; the whimsicality of this is delightful!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Well, you've milked this one for all that it's worth! Truly a bit of fairy magic at work here! I've heard of putting buttercups under the chin to see if you like butter and my grandfather had a wonderful way of describing small things, as being no bigger than a bee's gaiter button! Keep on churning them out; the whimsicality of this is delightful!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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lol - love the fun puns in your great review:)
Comment from lakeport
Butterfly Butter, indeed that's a very imaginary way what to do with a butterfly, I enjoyed reading it, Good luck at the contest, God bless you, Hugs! Lakeport.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Butterfly Butter, indeed that's a very imaginary way what to do with a butterfly, I enjoyed reading it, Good luck at the contest, God bless you, Hugs! Lakeport.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thanks Lakeport:)
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you are very welcome, Hugs! Lakeport.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi again Teresa - a good and very original idea for entry to the butterfly contest. Amusing and as any style is appropriate for the contest, I think your entry is very good and quite interesting in its uniqueness. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Hi again Teresa - a good and very original idea for entry to the butterfly contest. Amusing and as any style is appropriate for the contest, I think your entry is very good and quite interesting in its uniqueness. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thanks Dorothy - I just wanted to do something besides the usual 'butterflies are beautiful'.
Comment from misscookie
You capture my attention from the start.
I'm glad you could not find a picture for this poem.LOL
As much as I love butterflies
I don't think I love them that much Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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You capture my attention from the start.
I'm glad you could not find a picture for this poem.LOL
As much as I love butterflies
I don't think I love them that much Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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lol - I just had to have a little fun today:)
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Thanks for the laugh I needed that.
Cookie
Comment from ravenblack
I hope that no one takes your recipe to heart. Monarchs are already in decline. Love the humor in this piece, the parenthetical ( umm, fly) and finding those tiny tests, milking them with tweezers. Very funny.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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I hope that no one takes your recipe to heart. Monarchs are already in decline. Love the humor in this piece, the parenthetical ( umm, fly) and finding those tiny tests, milking them with tweezers. Very funny.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thanks - just wanted a fun and unique approach to the prompt. I love butterflies but get tired of reading all the fluffy 'beautiful butterfly' poems;)
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So do I. So do I. So much so, that I repeated myself. Good luck in the contest.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
I've never heard a poem like this before. You come up with such great ideas all the time. I see this one is for a contest again. I hope it goes far because it's sure interesting.
Kat
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Hi Teresa,
I've never heard a poem like this before. You come up with such great ideas all the time. I see this one is for a contest again. I hope it goes far because it's sure interesting.
Kat
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thanks again. I love hearing from you:)
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It's always nice to write reviews for you because you're a great poet. ( :
Comment from Joan E.
I was glad to keep the lighthearted mood going by reading your original interpretation of this prompt. Your whimsy is very visual and your punchline is choice. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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I was glad to keep the lighthearted mood going by reading your original interpretation of this prompt. Your whimsy is very visual and your punchline is choice. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you Joan. Yes, we both posted light-hearted whimsical poems today:)