Is It?
You decide...13 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Many thanks, Fez. Much appreciated. I know what you mean, same with haikus. My best so far was the brevette. 3 words and your have to review it! LOL
All the best.
Comment from CR Delport
I say if you kill a child in malice, you deserve to die. Only someone very evil can do a thing like that. This is well done. Good luck.
Have a most excellent day.
Christelle.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I say if you kill a child in malice, you deserve to die. Only someone very evil can do a thing like that. This is well done. Good luck.
Have a most excellent day.
Christelle.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I agree, but the death is really just revenge and does nothing to alleviate the grief and loss. It is a difficult proposition, I think. Is it enough?
Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated
Comment from Eric1
This is a very strongly worded but excellent poem for this competition, it conjures up all sorts of evocative thoughts and causes the reader to think hard, good luck in the contest my friend.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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This is a very strongly worded but excellent poem for this competition, it conjures up all sorts of evocative thoughts and causes the reader to think hard, good luck in the contest my friend.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Many thanks Eric. As always, very much appreciated
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It truly was MY pleasure my friend.