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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "We talk about love"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from kentuckywoman53
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Well done. So direct and to the point. Too many times the word love is spoken, but never shown. As the saying goes....Action speaks louder than words. You have a great talent!! Keep up the wonderful and inspirational postings. Millie

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    My dear sister of my heart, Millie
    I am so delighted to see you on reviews again. Thank you for liking this one... Just to demonstrate,, I love you lady....:-) The shining six is an extra bonus...
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
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We talk about love
Demonstration is better
Show your love today

Carolyn, what better words could be said? Demonstrating your love and feeling towards a love one, with even the smallest of gesture's is rewarding to your soul.

Nicely arranged, John

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Thank you John for this wonderful review. I am glad you look for an application of the poem, that is neat.
    Love, Carolyn
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I agree, demonstration is much better, just a smile, a touch of the hand, anything that puts a smile on a sad face, all these things are parts of love. Excellent! :) xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    As they say in Kindergarten,,,, Show and Tell.... thanks Sandra,
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Carolyn,

What a nice little poem this is. Very well written with a lot of good information
in it. I'm always surprised when you write a poem without a picture. I also like
what you say in your author notes ... and they will know we are Christians by
our love.

Kat

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Thanks Kat, I am back home now so will have better access to my pictures. :-) So glad you enjoyed it anyway. Love, Carolyn
Comment from gypsycaravan
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Definitely walk the walk. Talking the talk just doesn't cut it. Everyone needs and deserves that show of appreciation and care on a daily basis. Very nice work.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Thank you so much for your fine comments, I couldn't agree more.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from mauial
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Love the poem, great message. All talk and no action, right action that is, from most of the religions that say they are about love. Where is the love in terrorism?

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Hi there mauial, you are so right. Thank you for your comments.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Very true, notesandmore. Our actions speak louder than our words. People say they are going to do lots of things, but it is what they actually do about them that make the difference.

Well done, and an excellent message conveyed here. ~Dean

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Thanks Dean, I am an action person and appreciate those who are as well. You are so right.
    :-) Carolyn
reply by Dean Kuch on 27-Jan-2015
    You're more than welcome, Carolyn. ;)
Comment from Smoothiecool
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your few words in your 5-7-5 portrays well that it is easy to talk about love we need to show our love to all

good visual
flows

cheers smoothiecool

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Thanks SC... :-) Carolyn
reply by Smoothiecool on 28-Jan-2015
    welcome ...SC
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
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Very wise words Carolyn. Action speaks louder than words, I agree. Nice message in a solid 5-7-5 form. Well done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Hi Sarah, thanks so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
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Short succinct and profound. Thee author note is as brief as the poem but definitely as profound. It is amazing but that is the truth of the gospel: it is by our demonstration of love for our fellowmen that men would know that we have love for our Father. Great job!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
    Wow, and thank you for your wonderful words and generous rating. I am delighted you got so much from the few words. It is a challenge to write 5-7-5's that make sense.
    :-) Carolyn