Darling Miss Muppet
A tale of sorrow72 total reviews
Comment from DRG24
This is an awesome poem! I love the whimsical rhyming and short nature of it! The photo also pairs amazingly with the poetry! Nice!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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This is an awesome poem! I love the whimsical rhyming and short nature of it! The photo also pairs amazingly with the poetry! Nice!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the great review and and comments blessings, Roy, happy new year,
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Ha ha LOL good entry for such a competition, Roy. I love the cartoon picture you chose, and the look on the woman's face. She doesn't look as if her heart is in parenting! LOL The very best of luck with your entry, Giddy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Ha ha LOL good entry for such a competition, Roy. I love the cartoon picture you chose, and the look on the woman's face. She doesn't look as if her heart is in parenting! LOL The very best of luck with your entry, Giddy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Thanks giddy for visiting and giving a generous review, and your support. Roy.
Comment from chasennov
A tale of sorrow "Darling Miss Muppet" This poem you have created here is a reminder that nothing is really as it seems. There are always underlying currents to be found. Well done. Merry Xmas.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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A tale of sorrow "Darling Miss Muppet" This poem you have created here is a reminder that nothing is really as it seems. There are always underlying currents to be found. Well done. Merry Xmas.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Thank for your great encouragement and support Roy.
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You're most welcome, Roy.
Comment from kriver
Roy very funnnnnnnny poem.
I flows well. I liked the twist at the end,
I didn't see anything that needs to be changed.
The picture seems to go right along with the poem. I think it is a very good write.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Roy very funnnnnnnny poem.
I flows well. I liked the twist at the end,
I didn't see anything that needs to be changed.
The picture seems to go right along with the poem. I think it is a very good write.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from lakeport
Darling Miss puppet, indeed that's a lovely expressed poem. nice rhyming, Good luck at the contest. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. lakeport.
Merry Christmas!!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Darling Miss puppet, indeed that's a lovely expressed poem. nice rhyming, Good luck at the contest. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. lakeport.
Merry Christmas!!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for this great review and gracious comments, blessings, Roy.
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you are very welcome.lakeport.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem is adorable and cute! The author's words are funny, descriptive and interesting. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem is adorable and cute! The author's words are funny, descriptive and interesting. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for the beaut review and comments, happy new year, blessings, Roy.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Darling Miss Muppet' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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'Darling Miss Muppet' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Thank you Duchess for you great review and support over 2014, I praise God for you, you make it worthwhile, merry Christmas and a happy new year to you and yours, blessings, Roy.
Roy, thank you for your very kind seasonal greetings. I hope you and yours have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
God bless you, the Duchess
Comment from kanimozhi T
It' is an eligible contest entry. Wise descriptive phrase and picture. What a rhyme scheme:
"Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice "
Hearty wishes to win :)
KANI
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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It' is an eligible contest entry. Wise descriptive phrase and picture. What a rhyme scheme:
"Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice "
Hearty wishes to win :)
KANI
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha - what an unusual twist, Roy - this is so cute. I wonder if Miss Muppet has met the spider yet? (LOL!) Perfect rhyme and great meter give this just the lilt it needs to suit the topic - well done! Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Hahahaha - what an unusual twist, Roy - this is so cute. I wonder if Miss Muppet has met the spider yet? (LOL!) Perfect rhyme and great meter give this just the lilt it needs to suit the topic - well done! Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Thanks Dawn for the great, supportive review and words, blessings, Roy.
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Very much my pleasure! Blessings to you, too. :)
Comment from Pyrrho
It is rare that I visit this site these days because a five-star review is taken for granted by most participants and offering constructive criticism is a no-no. However I do read the occasional poem and review about 10% of what I read.
Humorous poetry is slightly easier to write than humorous prose because you only need one punch line in poetry while prose usually demands more.
I did get a laugh from your post but assess your rhymes to be forced and thus they dictate where the poem goes. I award a five-star assessment but suggest you develop the means to hide forced rhyming or, eliminate the need for it by working harder.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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It is rare that I visit this site these days because a five-star review is taken for granted by most participants and offering constructive criticism is a no-no. However I do read the occasional poem and review about 10% of what I read.
Humorous poetry is slightly easier to write than humorous prose because you only need one punch line in poetry while prose usually demands more.
I did get a laugh from your post but assess your rhymes to be forced and thus they dictate where the poem goes. I award a five-star assessment but suggest you develop the means to hide forced rhyming or, eliminate the need for it by working harder.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the review, I won't defend myself! I've often wondered what forced means, pretty academic don't you think?