The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 105 "December"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
26 total reviews
Comment from Cajungirl
If only we could hold tight to the December feeling for the entire year. Thank you for sharing this most beautiful Acrostic poem.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
If only we could hold tight to the December feeling for the entire year. Thank you for sharing this most beautiful Acrostic poem.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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And thank you V.
Yes it would be great if people could keep that loving spirit all year round. That is a sweet thought you have shared.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from Ben Colder
The photo reminds me of a lodge that I have sated . You have done well with this Acrostic. Hallmark worthy. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
The photo reminds me of a lodge that I have sated . You have done well with this Acrostic. Hallmark worthy. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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I like that, Hallmark worthy. Thanks Ben for always saying something memorable. So glad you enjoyed December. :-) Carolyn
Comment from butterfly4265
An excellent dedication to December written in acrostic style. Very good presentation with the artwork, and orange background/gold font which feels like the flames and warmth from the fire. It all looks very comfortable and cozy. Very well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
An excellent dedication to December written in acrostic style. Very good presentation with the artwork, and orange background/gold font which feels like the flames and warmth from the fire. It all looks very comfortable and cozy. Very well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you butterfly for this great review. I could almost feel the warmth as I chose the picture. So glad you mentioned that. I also appreciate the kind words and generous rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Nosha17
You have captured well the essence of December within your poem with well chosen words and imagery of the holiday season. Lovely picture and an enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
You have captured well the essence of December within your poem with well chosen words and imagery of the holiday season. Lovely picture and an enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thanks Faye, I appreciate, as always your kind and encouraging words. So glad you liked December... :-) Carolyn
Comment from gypsymoth
Nice summation of all that December brings to mind. These
are the things that bring a warmth with them that kind of melts us for a short while.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
Nice summation of all that December brings to mind. These
are the things that bring a warmth with them that kind of melts us for a short while.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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I like what you said.. Kind of melts us for a while.. December does do that. In the midst of cold there is warmth and love.
Thank you so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Neonewman
I am going to have to give this style a go. I enjoyed reading this well crafted piece thoroughly young lady and the artwork is stunning. God bless!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
I am going to have to give this style a go. I enjoyed reading this well crafted piece thoroughly young lady and the artwork is stunning. God bless!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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I am sure you will do well. Pick a word and go for it. I'm really glad you liked this one and thank you for the great rating as well. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Carolyn.
You've done a great write with this poem, using the word December. Each line reflects the special tidings of the season.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
Hi, Carolyn.
You've done a great write with this poem, using the word December. Each line reflects the special tidings of the season.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Hi Rosalyne,
Haven't seen you in a while, so happy you stopped by. I hope you are doing well.
Thanks for the wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn;
a very well written acrostic poem in which every start of the lines from each letter of the word December work really well together and in turn each line sows reference to one another. Very well played out.
Your acrostic poem is very inspirational and enlightening and also so full of warmth and seasonal greetings.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
Carolyn;
a very well written acrostic poem in which every start of the lines from each letter of the word December work really well together and in turn each line sows reference to one another. Very well played out.
Your acrostic poem is very inspirational and enlightening and also so full of warmth and seasonal greetings.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Hi there Alex,
thank you for this wonderful review of December, I am happy you enjoyed it..
:-) Carolyn
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You are so sincerely welcome Carolyn
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi Carolyn
You have here wrapped up a big present of what december could be ....and the festivities and the lights and the crackers.
Very imaginative and the imaregeries are handpicked for beauty and happiness
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
Hi Carolyn
You have here wrapped up a big present of what december could be ....and the festivities and the lights and the crackers.
Very imaginative and the imaregeries are handpicked for beauty and happiness
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Hi Benny,
Glad you enjoyed December. Thanks for the great review and generous stars.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
You outdid yourself, you Cardinal fan you! This is a great acrostic easily summing the month of December. You've nailed everything but the hoop-la of frantic shopping for all those gifts and sales. Thank you for that!
We put our Christmas tree up last Saturday. That alone changes the atmosphere in the home.
Nicely done, Carolyn. John
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
You outdid yourself, you Cardinal fan you! This is a great acrostic easily summing the month of December. You've nailed everything but the hoop-la of frantic shopping for all those gifts and sales. Thank you for that!
We put our Christmas tree up last Saturday. That alone changes the atmosphere in the home.
Nicely done, Carolyn. John
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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Hi John,
I haven't put the tree up yet but this week is the D-Day for it. It does create such a festive air in the home. So glad you enjoyed this one.
Take care and enjoy your sweet family
Love, Carolyn