Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Rats. No necktie party. Classic dog in the manger, didn't want to be with the gal but got his knickers in a wad when
somebody else did. Good old western justice all around.

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

LOL so glad you liked this one. I liked 'got his knickers in a wad'.... That would be a subject in itself. Thank you for the delightful review.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Curly Girly

Exceptional

This deserves 6 stars. It was an enjoyable story poem to read and savour. There's probably a lot of truth in these lines. I reckon it was like that back then.
I think this should be hyphenated: heart broken
Personally, I like poems to end with a period.
It sounds quite professional. Have you done any of the FS poetry classes?

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

No I haven't had classes since college. However, I would probably benefit from them. I do study forms when I can. So glad you enjoyed this one Nicole. The beautiful shining sixer is awesome.
BTW... do you have any simple lamb recipes. This will shock you, but I have not cooked lamb as far as I can remember. The few times I tried it (other than Gyros, which I love) it had to much mint flavor.
I checked on the Internet and it seems it pairs well with garlic and rosemary. I figured the 'local lamb lady' would be the one to ask. :-)
Carolyn

reply by Curly Girly on 02-Dec-2014

If it is a roast - I would suggest to cook it slowly and let it rest for 10 mins before carving. Jamie Oliver and Hugh Fernly-Whatever-his-name-is have good recipes, best to google them. Rosemary and garlic do work well. Best wishes!

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thanks Nicole

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Good story and a great entry in the quatrain contest.
Good AABB rhymes,
Strong meter and wonderful images to create atmosphere.
Good luck in contest. Nancy

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thanks Nancy for this wonderful and affirming review of Saga of Sam. So glad you liked it.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Poor old Sam...I think his delusions did him in, as much as his bitter heart. Wonderful story told here...I really enjoyed this...best of luck to you in this contest!

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thanks Irish Rain for the wonderful review and best wishes.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Irish Rain on 02-Dec-2014

You are so welcome Miss Carolyn!

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

This is cute and well written, Carolyn. It reminds me of a song my Aunt Vera taught me, 'Give My Love to Nellie, Jack. Nicely done. Miss Sally

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thanks Miss Sally, so glad you enjoyed the Saga of Sam. :-) Carolyn

reply by angelface2 on 01-Dec-2014

You're very welcome. It was kind to refreshing. I haven't been able to write for a while!! Hugs. Miss Sally

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Passions run too high and murder is committed in the heat of the moment. Communication is the moral to the story. Well written story in a poem, with excellent rhyming, description and message. Most enjoyable, good luck in the contest. Faye

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thanks Faye for such a wonderful review of this one, and the good wishes. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah! And they say Hell hath no fury as a woman scorned? I would contend that a man with a grudge and a gun comes in at a close second... a man just like poor Sam.

What a story-in-a-poem, Carolyn, and perfect for the Quatrain Poetry Contest about to be unveiled by the FS Committee in two days.

I wish you the best of luck with it! ~Dean

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thanks Dean, What a wonderful review from you. I appreciate that you liked the quatrain and that you felt in was a good entry.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi, Carolyn,

Well, duh, how did you know westerns are my weakness??! LOL! I love, love, six star love this! My first start given so far this week.

Such a fun story, well, maybe not so fun for Sam's girl and new guy. Although, Sam does need to maintain his temper.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*,*)

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

How cool is that? Thanks Jax for this fabulous review and rating. I was kicking this around and almost made it a story, then saw the contest. Yep, the noose got cheated....
Have a great and safe week. We have ice here.
Love, Carolyn

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 01-Dec-2014

I have our windows and doors open!! Yahoo!! Not to rub it in, BUT, it's been in the 80's during the day.

Cheers... Jax

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Not rubbing it in???? What conditions must you have before you brag.. LOL... We had 62 yesterday morning and 21 this morning. The temp dropped like a rock.
I guess I am gearing up for our trip west in January. I have been painting western desert, and sunset scenes for weeks now.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 01-Dec-2014

If you're coming to Arizona, and near Havasu, come one over! (*.*)

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014

We had friends there for years. They both passed away just last year. Barbara and Wayne Webster. Larry is very familiar with the area but I have never been there, wouldn't that be fabulous to meet? It may not happen but thank you so much for thinking of it. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your words allow the reader to see and feel the story of Sam and the fate he endured as he ran from the law after killing his girl and the man she was caught with
expecting her to wait for ten years

good visual

good AA/BB rhyme through out verses

good alliteration through out verses

good use consonance & assonance through verses

flows easy read

cheers smoothiecool

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thank you SC for a great overview of this quatrain. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Have a wonderful week,
:-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 01-Dec-2014

most welcome Carolyn

have a blessed week...SC <:> Faye

Comment from GE Parson

Exceptional

Good Morming Carolyn

EXCELLENT POEM! Kept me anxious to see what was coming next.

I like the way you ended it on a "assumed conclusion.

Keep 'em coming You are blessed with story telling (writing)
talent.

TTYL
Jerry

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Hi Jerry, thought the old cowboy in this one might appeal to you. I always appreciate your fine reviews and stars.
Hope things are well with you and family
:-) Carolyn