Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements beautifully. The syllable count is spot on and the imagery conveyed is lovely. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

And thank you for reading and enjoying, I always appreciate your kind encouragement. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Wonderful entry in this 5-7-5 contest...concise and accurate...says it all. Amazing to me how they just KNOW, but, like you said...God's perfect system!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

All creation is fascinating to me, but geese just have a special place in my heart. Thank you as always for your kind remarks.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

I think it would be nice to catch a flight and head further south for the winter but unfortunately I'm not a goose and so I'll stay here and try to keep things going..

Well done with your 5-7-5 Buck

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thanks Buck, We will be heading to Arizona in late January, a short reprieve from Missouri winter. So glad you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn

reply by Trybuck on 08-Nov-2014

Say hi to my Aunt for me... Kidding, though I do have kin folks in Arizona. Hope you enjoy your time away when you go..

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This 5-7-5 haiku looks perfect to me:

Across the night sky

geese in formation fly south

God's perfect system

Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thanks Nicole for the fine review. I appreciate the best wishes.:-) Carolyn

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Yes, they are a beautiful sight. Amazing as to how they know which way to go, and where to end up. Very nice 5/7/5. I wish you good luck with it, Carolyn. Hugs. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thanks Miss Sally.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one and appreciate the good luck wishes. :-) Carolyn

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

You said it in your poem... GPS, God's perfect system! I love the photo. Did you take it perchance?


Across the night sky
geese in formation fly south
God's perfect system

Nicely done... John

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Hi there John,
No unfortunately this is not one of my photos but I wish it were. I love geese. So glad you thought it was nicely done.
Have a great week-end my friend.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is a great poem about the geese. I saw a lot of them the other day by the hospital where they hang out because there's a small pool of water. Today snow is coming down steadily. Old Winter always has to push autumn away early.

Kat

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Hi there Kat,
We have had no snow yet but we know it is on its way, sooner or later. Some geese do stay here for the winter also, but many fly over going farther south. So happy you liked this one.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Across the night sky, indeed it's time to fly south, that's a lovely expressed 5/7/5 poem. Good luck at the contest. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this one. :-) Carolyn

reply by lakeport on 08-Nov-2014

you are welcome,Hugs! lakeport.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

stunning presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
concrete imagery that makes for a scene that is both easy and inviting to visualize
and such a thoughtful reflection in your in final line
Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thank you Brooke :-) Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I don't know what touch me the most. the lovely artwork you choose for your write, which is a perfect match.
or the authors notes
I love how your words move.
Thank you for sharing,
Have a blessed weekend.
Cookie

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Hi there misscookie,
I am so glad you enjoyed this one. I hope you have a blessed weekend as well.
Love, Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 10-Nov-2014

You're very welcome. I had a blessed week end thank you. May you and yours have a blessed day.
Until next time.
Cookie