i am poetic compulsion
who are you?-contest entry36 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
A very clever take on this, mikey. Being a poetic compulsion give you a great to deal with the format. Poets always notice the tiny and the large of life.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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A very clever take on this, mikey. Being a poetic compulsion give you a great to deal with the format. Poets always notice the tiny and the large of life.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Hi. I couldn't resist this strange format. Glad you liked what a came up with. A number of good pieces actually. Fun to write. Thank you, mikey
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the poem. I love poetic compulsion. It makes you write about a variety of things and emotions. You write about anger, you write about love, you write about most emotions. You write about people full of love, you write about people with not love. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
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I love the poem. I love poetic compulsion. It makes you write about a variety of things and emotions. You write about anger, you write about love, you write about most emotions. You write about people full of love, you write about people with not love. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the I am poem. It flows really nicely. And I like the rhymes that you used in your poem. Best of luck.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the I am poem. It flows really nicely. And I like the rhymes that you used in your poem. Best of luck.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from judiverse
You were brave to try this with all the complicated rules, but you achieved excellent results. You do a wonderful job of completing each of the thoughts and give a lot of insight. This sounds like someone willing to explore alternative possibilities. I like your repetition of I wonder in relation to pretending its a cynical world. Great concluding couplet. Poetic compulsion at work. Excellent rhyme, and your words are well chosen. judi
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You were brave to try this with all the complicated rules, but you achieved excellent results. You do a wonderful job of completing each of the thoughts and give a lot of insight. This sounds like someone willing to explore alternative possibilities. I like your repetition of I wonder in relation to pretending its a cynical world. Great concluding couplet. Poetic compulsion at work. Excellent rhyme, and your words are well chosen. judi
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from Twilightspire
A poem truly worthy of a six star, if only I had one. I love the scheme and the whole theme of the piece. You made this fun to read and made me rethink how a poet sees the world. Good luck with the contest, I have a feeling you'll do great.
-T.J.
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A poem truly worthy of a six star, if only I had one. I love the scheme and the whole theme of the piece. You made this fun to read and made me rethink how a poet sees the world. Good luck with the contest, I have a feeling you'll do great.
-T.J.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from mrsmajor
Michael,
Such a well constructed poem, following all the specific of the structure....meaningful thoughts too...I wish you well in the contest!
Warmly,
Victoria
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Michael,
Such a well constructed poem, following all the specific of the structure....meaningful thoughts too...I wish you well in the contest!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
They were very strange instructions and hard to follow. You have followed them to a "T"! You even made sense of it. You described me fully! LOL! Well done. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
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They were very strange instructions and hard to follow. You have followed them to a "T"! You even made sense of it. You described me fully! LOL! Well done. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from robina1978
You stuck to the rules perfectly. I liked you made it about poetic compulsion- original thought. Best wishes for the prompt. Please win:)
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You stuck to the rules perfectly. I liked you made it about poetic compulsion- original thought. Best wishes for the prompt. Please win:)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from adewpearl
You follow the contest's prescribed pattern of lines well
I like your choice of refrain line
good alliteration in wonder why and consonance in flag flying unfurled
thoughtful observations formatted well into this style
Brooke
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You follow the contest's prescribed pattern of lines well
I like your choice of refrain line
good alliteration in wonder why and consonance in flag flying unfurled
thoughtful observations formatted well into this style
Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow. Wow. If i could use this whole page to just say wow I would. Absolutely fantastic. I would love to try this but it is like a tonguetwister and you dont want to know what happened then...not pretty. This followed all the rules as i can tell and it was true.
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Wow. Wow. If i could use this whole page to just say wow I would. Absolutely fantastic. I would love to try this but it is like a tonguetwister and you dont want to know what happened then...not pretty. This followed all the rules as i can tell and it was true.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
