Possibilities
Sometimes we need to start over; look again...31 total reviews
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of Possibilities. You have my vote. This is truly an uplifting poem with wonderful ideas for a person to rebuild their life. Excellent. Carole
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To the author of Possibilities. You have my vote. This is truly an uplifting poem with wonderful ideas for a person to rebuild their life. Excellent. Carole
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
To gain a better perspective about life and oneself can bring about a new appreciation for what you already do have.
A few areas of proximate rhyming: blue/view; see/tea;you/anew.
Charlene
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To gain a better perspective about life and oneself can bring about a new appreciation for what you already do have.
A few areas of proximate rhyming: blue/view; see/tea;you/anew.
Charlene
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from emrpoems
you will have my vote for sure. This is very uplifting in a delightful kind of way. You have highlighted all the aspects of life that we can enjoy and end on a spiritual note
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you will have my vote for sure. This is very uplifting in a delightful kind of way. You have highlighted all the aspects of life that we can enjoy and end on a spiritual note
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from prefabmouse
I enjoyed this poem very much. It is very good advice to stop and smell the flowers and renew yourself when life lets you down or becomes difficult. I wish you luck in the contest.
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I enjoyed this poem very much. It is very good advice to stop and smell the flowers and renew yourself when life lets you down or becomes difficult. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Yes we do need to start over and contemplate .......
Well done ...such a good theme and good poem.....when despondent go to the pond.....
God bless
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Yes we do need to start over and contemplate .......
Well done ...such a good theme and good poem.....when despondent go to the pond.....
God bless
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is excellent writing, mystery writer, walking in a different direction takes us back into the lap of happiness that our Savior has for us. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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this is excellent writing, mystery writer, walking in a different direction takes us back into the lap of happiness that our Savior has for us. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
Very nice, uplifting, practical-has a familiar sound to it.
looks like firm rhymes and graceful meter and no way I could add anything to it, so: excellent.
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Very nice, uplifting, practical-has a familiar sound to it.
looks like firm rhymes and graceful meter and no way I could add anything to it, so: excellent.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from Judy Couch
This poem truely is uplifting and encouraging. I liked the subject you chose to write about. I liked the positive language of the poem.
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This poem truely is uplifting and encouraging. I liked the subject you chose to write about. I liked the positive language of the poem.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Hi there, you just got my vote and my last six star. If this inspiring little poem doesn't lift you up, then you are pretty far down. :-)
I enjoyed all of it, but especially the last verse.
We'll walk in Christ's sweet garden
A red rose cut for you
We'll learn to grow in friendship's light
We'll look at life-anew
Well done, Carolyn
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Hi there, you just got my vote and my last six star. If this inspiring little poem doesn't lift you up, then you are pretty far down. :-)
I enjoyed all of it, but especially the last verse.
We'll walk in Christ's sweet garden
A red rose cut for you
We'll learn to grow in friendship's light
We'll look at life-anew
Well done, Carolyn
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014
Comment from jaded831
Your poem felt like a calm relaxing day, worry free. The kind of day I strive for. Your poem had excellent tone. I didn't like the picture much, but your poem was excellent with or without the picture.
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Your poem felt like a calm relaxing day, worry free. The kind of day I strive for. Your poem had excellent tone. I didn't like the picture much, but your poem was excellent with or without the picture.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2014