haiku (owl observes)
Nature 3-5-3 contest19 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Ouch. I certainly wouldn't want that owl observing me. He looks like he means serious business. The unsuspecting prey is, no doubt about it, going to become dinner very shortly.
This has a lot of passion in it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Ouch. I certainly wouldn't want that owl observing me. He looks like he means serious business. The unsuspecting prey is, no doubt about it, going to become dinner very shortly.
This has a lot of passion in it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you - love the word "passion" As that is how I see the survival of owls.
Comment from royowen
I like your ' nature 3-5-3' contest entry! This is a limiting poetic form, you have to come up with an " out of the ordinary " entry, I like this one however, with its attractive artwork, I hope you fare well in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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I like your ' nature 3-5-3' contest entry! This is a limiting poetic form, you have to come up with an " out of the ordinary " entry, I like this one however, with its attractive artwork, I hope you fare well in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Roy.
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Your "talons"....err..."talent" is for writing great short Senyru! What a turning line! The photo will hook your reader. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Your "talons"....err..."talent" is for writing great short Senyru! What a turning line! The photo will hook your reader. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Oh! I love that word "talent." Even though this is a haiku and not a senyru, I'm extremely pleased with this review. Thank you.
Comment from Domino 2
Very dramatic and vivid imagery of the owl's big round eyes in his turning head, stalking the prey, before it springs into action and grabs it with its talons.
Excellent.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Very dramatic and vivid imagery of the owl's big round eyes in his turning head, stalking the prey, before it springs into action and grabs it with its talons.
Excellent.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Ray. I felt I needed to show "the other side of nature" Great review.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great haiku about nature written in required 3-5-3 format. Job well done. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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This is a great haiku about nature written in required 3-5-3 format. Job well done. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Capricorn30
Talons not only sharp-this nocturnal predator's senses also sharp in a different context;
Fear for the night creatures who are in this great bird's sights;
Excellent!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Talons not only sharp-this nocturnal predator's senses also sharp in a different context;
Fear for the night creatures who are in this great bird's sights;
Excellent!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review.
Comment from Charlene0513
A wild-looking specimen of a nocturnal bird that has a sharp focus and with tenacity snatches there prey with little care.
Their ruthless and relentless claws are fatal.
Charlene
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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A wild-looking specimen of a nocturnal bird that has a sharp focus and with tenacity snatches there prey with little care.
Their ruthless and relentless claws are fatal.
Charlene
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Exactly, I felt I needed to write a true haiku about nature. Thank you, for "getting" my meaning.
Comment from Eric1
Beautifully descriptive Nature 3-5-3, about one of natures most prolific sources of writing, wonderful picture enhances your brilliant words, Good luck!
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Beautifully descriptive Nature 3-5-3, about one of natures most prolific sources of writing, wonderful picture enhances your brilliant words, Good luck!
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This picture is impressive because the owl actually looks like it sees something it wants and it looks so determined. Great job friend
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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This picture is impressive because the owl actually looks like it sees something it wants and it looks so determined. Great job friend
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you, for the wonderful review.