Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

trees and leaves alive

need air water sun and touch

just like family
A family of trees.........
Well written
God bless

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thanks for reading.

Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

"trees and leaves alive

need air water sun and touch

just like family"
A nice haiku.
A great use of presentation.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thanks for reading.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

you are so right...trees are alive...and they need to be taken care of...they are what cleans the air...very well written...and a great picture...

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for reading.

reply by l.raven on 12-Jun-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

love the picture. Yes I guess trees are just like family as they require just the same as us to stay alive. Am always so grateful that God made trees, such beauty and that shade they give is so soothing for a tired soul

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a good 5-7-5 tree-hugger poem. I would try to get rid of one of the 'and's' in the second line though. Good luck.
teresa

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thanks for reading and the helpful hint.