The Bard of Bel Air
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So he IS dead then. I thought it would be more fun if he was just kidnapped. Maybe he was drugged in the body bag to appear dead. But it doesn't matter. Not likely the neighbor kid was in his treehouse looking in that window at that time, but you never know.
Who are the guys wanting Ruby? Legit or not? Do they know who she really is? Is their plan to kill her just in case she finds out about her dad's death?
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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So he IS dead then. I thought it would be more fun if he was just kidnapped. Maybe he was drugged in the body bag to appear dead. But it doesn't matter. Not likely the neighbor kid was in his treehouse looking in that window at that time, but you never know.
Who are the guys wanting Ruby? Legit or not? Do they know who she really is? Is their plan to kill her just in case she finds out about her dad's death?
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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He may not be dead. He may be drugged. There are things like traffic to and from the house that may have been observed or caught by other surveillance from other properties. The guys with Ruby are legit. She doesn't know yet, but may soon. I am actually a chapter ahead for a change. Hahaha. So, I DO know what happens next. Unless someone comes up with some great idea to change my mind. I hope I can get to some of these this weekend. Gotta catch up on reviewing first. I loved your last review and smiling from ear to ear and probably won't stop for awhile. Thank you! The Bard does get to say things that I wish I could say in certain situations! mikey
Comment from Sankey
Really getting into this mate. Need to do some more writing myself real soon. Good work but a lot of SPAGs mate.
Didn't take long ha....disturbance brings the authority's (authorities)
to learn the (that)Johanthon Blackwell
I wonder if these are an IPAD editor thing...someone else was having the same problem earlier...each other,(')s company.
on the detective(-')s(') minds
"I used to come her(e) often
Does this need these? " In N Out"
over here we Nod in the affirmative, mate. Shook would be negative.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Really getting into this mate. Need to do some more writing myself real soon. Good work but a lot of SPAGs mate.
Didn't take long ha....disturbance brings the authority's (authorities)
to learn the (that)Johanthon Blackwell
I wonder if these are an IPAD editor thing...someone else was having the same problem earlier...each other,(')s company.
on the detective(-')s(') minds
"I used to come her(e) often
Does this need these? " In N Out"
over here we Nod in the affirmative, mate. Shook would be negative.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Good eyes as always. Yes "In N Out" I knew it looked funny, I couldn't figure out why!! A hamburger joint. We Nod only in the affirmative, but we shook every which way. Hahaha. In the positive it would be a more enthusiastic nod. Way behind in these. Hahaha. 100s. Popped up to let you know I read them and pay attention. And to say hello! mikey
Comment from ProjectBluebook
My boy--my boy! Knew it wouldn't be long. Da..da da da da da! I'm curious about that letter. Or is it the past, meeting with Blackwell and Diamond. That maid Izzy ... I'm speculating, there must had been a good reason to can her. Did she know something? Or see something? If them detectives can find her, maybe, she will sing like a bird. Hum, a twist, maybe, the maid wasn't fired. Maybe, she was killed to silence her. Maybe, buried in the basement beneath the concrete by Uncle Daniel. Maybe, old man Blackwell and Daniel is in cahoots. Maybe, there is some new concrete in that basement and Izzy is buried there. Of course, Mr. Blackwell could have said that he fired her but are there witnesses to back it up. Yep, Mikey, I think up all kinds of crazy stuff. I believe that old had, Esmeralda knows something too but she may be protecting her dear son. She may know about the maid. Just some ideas ... I am wacky.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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My boy--my boy! Knew it wouldn't be long. Da..da da da da da! I'm curious about that letter. Or is it the past, meeting with Blackwell and Diamond. That maid Izzy ... I'm speculating, there must had been a good reason to can her. Did she know something? Or see something? If them detectives can find her, maybe, she will sing like a bird. Hum, a twist, maybe, the maid wasn't fired. Maybe, she was killed to silence her. Maybe, buried in the basement beneath the concrete by Uncle Daniel. Maybe, old man Blackwell and Daniel is in cahoots. Maybe, there is some new concrete in that basement and Izzy is buried there. Of course, Mr. Blackwell could have said that he fired her but are there witnesses to back it up. Yep, Mikey, I think up all kinds of crazy stuff. I believe that old had, Esmeralda knows something too but she may be protecting her dear son. She may know about the maid. Just some ideas ... I am wacky.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Check my latest profile post!! Hahaha. I have another chapter already to go for tomorrow. Three major twists! Someone gets kidnapped. No wonder I never finish a story. I keep making them more complicated! I haven't got them fighting over the will, yet. Maybe a couple other kids showing up. Maybe bogus, maybe not. With all that money at play, who knows what will come out of the woodwork. The National Enquirer will be making up stories or maybe there true. I wish I knew. But, that wouldn't be as much fun. Check your mail. mikey
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Sounds great! the more the better for me. I usually don't get confused. i can juggle lots of things going on simultaneously. I like riding on the edge. I will post tomorrow. Been busy today. Later Lion King