Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

Time wasted can never be regained, nor can our youth. Thought provoking words, smooth flow, great presentation- less makes it more. Nice write!

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

thanks!

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

Time and tide wait for no man. That is the first thought that came into my mind after having read this excellent piece of poetic artistry. This was a well written verse that was driven with a good poetic thought transference... John

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

thank you. I appreciate the review.