February rhythm
Free verse poetry32 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. It is about spring coming. I am looking forward to it. It has been a long time coming this year. Winter has been harsh on most of the United States. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. It is about spring coming. I am looking forward to it. It has been a long time coming this year. Winter has been harsh on most of the United States. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for reviewing zanya
Comment from Cariboubill
The poem breaths of Spring. I like your third and fourth lines about the light coming earlier and the shadows, later. Good creative thinking. Very beautiful writing.
...Bill
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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The poem breaths of Spring. I like your third and fourth lines about the light coming earlier and the shadows, later. Good creative thinking. Very beautiful writing.
...Bill
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the review and the 6 stars zanya
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-h-h-h-h-h-h.... The wonderful, never ending and beautiful cycles of life. All of the things you've so skillful included in this outstanding entry bring forth thoughts of spring, and the hopefulness of spring's renewal.
I really enjoyed reading this one. Clearly, to me it was one of the best!
Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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A-h-h-h-h-h-h.... The wonderful, never ending and beautiful cycles of life. All of the things you've so skillful included in this outstanding entry bring forth thoughts of spring, and the hopefulness of spring's renewal.
I really enjoyed reading this one. Clearly, to me it was one of the best!
Good luck to you!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you indeed for this superb review zanya
Comment from ravenblack
In February!?!?!?!- I wish. Where are you from? Nice descriptions of spring reawakening. I would just reconsider the lamb on spindly legs as "out like a lion, in like a lamb", it is overused.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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In February!?!?!?!- I wish. Where are you from? Nice descriptions of spring reawakening. I would just reconsider the lamb on spindly legs as "out like a lion, in like a lamb", it is overused.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for this considered review zanya
Comment from l.raven
so very nicely written...easing us into the next season...and how mother nature will show it's beauty...love the wording in this one...picture perfect
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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so very nicely written...easing us into the next season...and how mother nature will show it's beauty...love the wording in this one...picture perfect
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Wow I am delighted with this review zanya
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you are so welcome...xxoo luff
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very good poem. Lines like,
Daffodils dare to dance
and others does show a cycle of life. Your poem reads well, and the last line sums this poem up well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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This was a very good poem. Lines like,
Daffodils dare to dance
and others does show a cycle of life. Your poem reads well, and the last line sums this poem up well. Nice job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for this review and for reading and engaging zanya
Comment from rouskin
The poem flowed well, and the message was good Excellent artwork too I wish you the best of luck in the contest Well done
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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The poem flowed well, and the message was good Excellent artwork too I wish you the best of luck in the contest Well done
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem is so nice. Each line is a gem. It's hard to pick a favorite, but I'll go with the first, third and fourth. "Wind's raw edge softens" is a good one, too.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Your poem is so nice. Each line is a gem. It's hard to pick a favorite, but I'll go with the first, third and fourth. "Wind's raw edge softens" is a good one, too.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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' a gem' - what a wonderful description - I am delighted - thank you indeed zanya
Comment from Jackarrie
I love this great free verse poem. It has lovely imagery describing the joys of spring. The crocuses are the first to show their coloured petals, we then welcome all the colours that follows. A very good entry for the free verse contest. Good luck. Mary
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I love this great free verse poem. It has lovely imagery describing the joys of spring. The crocuses are the first to show their coloured petals, we then welcome all the colours that follows. A very good entry for the free verse contest. Good luck. Mary
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Sylvia Page
Spring is in the air, the crocuses and the daffodils herald it in blowing trumpets for God's greater glory. A beautiful poem depicting all the splendour of spring.
Best wishes
Sylvia
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Spring is in the air, the crocuses and the daffodils herald it in blowing trumpets for God's greater glory. A beautiful poem depicting all the splendour of spring.
Best wishes
Sylvia
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for reading and reviewing zanya