Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Hey! What am I saying
everyone knows
you can't over- indulge
in Chocolate
and can one really write
too many poems
if so then
it's a 'good thing'
'cause
over-poetry-a-zation
might eventually lead
too successful
royalties paid

Publication

LOL girl, this is funny and true. You can never write too much poetry. Heheheh.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Hi there, so glad you liked this metaphor filled little silly. Have a great week, love, Carolyn

reply by Gungalo on 18-Feb-2014

Smile girl.

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn.
What a wonderful styled poem. Your words caught me right from the opening sentence. Great switch and humour used in reference to chocolate. I agree, we can never have too much.
You completed the poem so nicely, with the dream many of us have, publication. Well done.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thanks Rosalyne, glad you got the message in this funny little piece. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Carolyn, this is a creative piece to read. I loved how your grabbed from many different images to wield your message. Nicely done my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

And thank you for reading it Maureen, I sometimes have to get a little silly.. and as for the chocolate.. You are always on my mind. LOL . Love, Carolyn

Comment from PaddyMac

Excellent

An enjoyable poem that flows really well until the chocolate gets mentioned! Then it goes off the rails as insightful musings turn to rant. A pity for me that the ending did not do the beginning justice. A fun read nevertheless, thanks for sharing!
Paddy

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thanks Paddy for the comments. It was fun to write, and yes I did start ranting.. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

I must say one thing, your random thoughts turned out to be a lovely poem. I found the read very well-written and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

And thank you for reading and enjoying. Even I have to get a bit 'silly' sometimes. :-)

reply by Cajungirl on 18-Feb-2014

Makes you feel good huh? LOL

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Yes it does..

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi Carolyn
How are you?

Sorry in my last review I forgot to ask about your family's and your own health of your own. It is still morning here,cold and flooding.
You are also having a very bad patch of trouble with the snow. I see?

This writing is something you seem to be enjoying writing.
There is pleasure and there is joy , there is everything nicely expressed.
Take care.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Hi Benny, Sometimes I just have to get a little bit silly. Lots of metaphors, glad you liked it. We are doing well at the moment. And I hope you are too my friend. :-) Carolyn

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Exceptional

This is great, Carolyn. A lovely poem about poetry--one of my favorite subjects. Each stanza paints a clear picture.

one spag/ too successful (to)

A delightful poem to read~Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

So glad you enjoyed this one Debbie, thanks for the edit and the awesome award. Love, Carolyn

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

over-poetry-a-zation might eventually lead
too successful royalties paid
Publication

Now ain't that the true bottom line goal of any of on this site, to be published? Anyone saying no to that is full of it!

I liked how you presented your ideas here with your poem.

As usual, Carolyn, magnificent! John

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Have to get a little silly sometimes. Yes, publication is the goal. So glad you read and liked it. Have a great week John, love, Carolyn

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, I enjoyed this one for several reasons. First of all, I love to make up words, too. LOL The comparisons that you use to explain poetry's conception are well conceived. Fun rhyme and yummy conclusion. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thanks GracieAnn, we have to be a little silly sometimes. LOL
glad you liked the poem. Yes, I seem to remember you are quite an inventor of words. :-) Carolyn

reply by GracieAnn on 18-Feb-2014

Yes, you are correct. :0 GracieAnn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is a really cute poem with all kinds of things to think about. I enjoyed it a lot and hope I remember some of the things so maybe I can start writing poetry again.

Kat

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Hi there Kat. Just grab a hunk of chocolate and pen in hand and go to it. Thanks for your great comments. :-) Carolyn