Attitude
It all begins and ends with me26 total reviews
Comment from pbroussard209
lol, it was the picture that drew me to this poem along with the title, The picture looks like my cat Pickles, Attitude and all. This was a great poem, you did a great job with structure and flow.
good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
lol, it was the picture that drew me to this poem along with the title, The picture looks like my cat Pickles, Attitude and all. This was a great poem, you did a great job with structure and flow.
good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel that ones attitude is self governed and we are the only ones able to change it from a scowl to a smile
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
good luck in the in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel that ones attitude is self governed and we are the only ones able to change it from a scowl to a smile
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a fantastic Nonet for the contest. Your syllable count was perfect. Nice rhyming with hard words to rhyme with. Good luck!!
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
This is a fantastic Nonet for the contest. Your syllable count was perfect. Nice rhyming with hard words to rhyme with. Good luck!!
~Teresa~
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thanks for reviewing and the bonus six
Comment from tfawcus
I like the idea behind this poem that we have responsibility for our own moods. We are autonomous beings and should be able to rule ourselves. Whatever we decide is on display for the rest of the world in our actions and our attitudes. It is never anonymous. A nice write!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
I like the idea behind this poem that we have responsibility for our own moods. We are autonomous beings and should be able to rule ourselves. Whatever we decide is on display for the rest of the world in our actions and our attitudes. It is never anonymous. A nice write!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the review. It is up to us, isn't it? Tthe only thing we really have control over.
Comment from padumachitta
hello. what a brilliant little poem. it reads well. I like the message, we can change our minds, our moods and our attitudes.
Good luck in the contest
may you be well
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
hello. what a brilliant little poem. it reads well. I like the message, we can change our minds, our moods and our attitudes.
Good luck in the contest
may you be well
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing and welcome to fanstory.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a perfect nonet - perfect syllable count. It contains a good play on words and you have given much thought in conveying this message in your poem. You picked a good picture - I can't think of a domestic animal with more attitude than a cat. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
This is a perfect nonet - perfect syllable count. It contains a good play on words and you have given much thought in conveying this message in your poem. You picked a good picture - I can't think of a domestic animal with more attitude than a cat. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I know, I have had several cats, and can surely attest to that.
Comment from suep
I enjoyed your nonet. You've met the syllable and line requirements. I like your use of autonomous / synonymous / anonymous and how well they fit into this poem that carries a positive message. Nice presentation, too. Great job ... Best wishes in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
I enjoyed your nonet. You've met the syllable and line requirements. I like your use of autonomous / synonymous / anonymous and how well they fit into this poem that carries a positive message. Nice presentation, too. Great job ... Best wishes in the contest! :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the kin review and best wishes.
Comment from livelylinda
Author: very cute! A perfect nonet with a perfect picture. We have five cats but one has the attitude problem. She is big and fluffy and beautiful black and white. She thinks she is Queen Shebah and rules her domain. However, she is not the cat in charge and leaving her scent around the house day after day has sent her to permanent housing in the backyard. She is not happy and still has her nose in the air. Good write here and a good contender for the contest. livelylinda
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
Author: very cute! A perfect nonet with a perfect picture. We have five cats but one has the attitude problem. She is big and fluffy and beautiful black and white. She thinks she is Queen Shebah and rules her domain. However, she is not the cat in charge and leaving her scent around the house day after day has sent her to permanent housing in the backyard. She is not happy and still has her nose in the air. Good write here and a good contender for the contest. livelylinda
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I have had several cats throughout the years and the ones with attitude were quite difficult. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Frankeddy
Nice Nonet poem Good poetical structure and syllable count.
Beautiful accompanying picture of a lovely black cat.
All exhibited in a nice and clear sharp setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
Nice Nonet poem Good poetical structure and syllable count.
Beautiful accompanying picture of a lovely black cat.
All exhibited in a nice and clear sharp setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the detailed review.
Comment from Lylise
This is a solid entry into the nonet poem contest. All requirements have been met. This is well presented and I liked the content and flow of this. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
This is a solid entry into the nonet poem contest. All requirements have been met. This is well presented and I liked the content and flow of this. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the kind review.