Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Poet,

The picture is beautiful and you gave it worth with your well written nonet poem. It's like they clasp arms and become great friends.

Kat

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

What a nice review Kat, thanks so much.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in good syllable count for the nonet, but I'm not a fan of lines that leave words like "the" hanging at the end
nice alliteration in soft sweet sounds
beautiful descriptive detail creates a lovely serene mood :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

I agree with you completely and would not normally leave 'the' on the end of a line, however, in this instance, simply due to syllable count, I could find no other word with which to flow to Soft sweet sounds... articles are difficult to find a sub for at times. I appreciate your thoroughness. Glad you liked it overall.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

Ah, yes, after reading this I feel very relaxed. Great flow and imagery in this piece. Great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

Glad this one was relaxing for you :-) and very happy you enjoyed it.

Comment from LorraineK

Excellent

What a beautiful poem describing the beautiful scene of early twilight. You picked perfect poetic words to portray the peaceful evening. Your poem was a gem. LorraineK

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

LorraineK what an awesome review you have given Linger, thank you so much.

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

This is a very beautiful poem and the poem paints a very beautiful picture too. I never review on poetic style as I am not a poet and my ignorance would soon show. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

You sound so much like Ms Evelyn, who I am praying is doing well. Thank you Janie for this wonderful review.

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

I think this is the kind of poem that is really showcased by this form. Your art work drew me right in. It's all about peace ad serenity. I liked the inner line rhyme.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

Thanks so much for this great review. I'm glad you enjoyed 'Linger'.

reply by DALLAS01 on 11-Jan-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I like the format which was well laid out. I have never tried this format before but you have given me inspiration tio try. nice poem!!!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

Try it, the hardest part is getting started... I am glad you liked 'Linger'.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very nice and well written. Writing a meaningful sonnet that is structurally sound and conveys a real emotional meaning to the reader is difficult, but you have done it well.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

Thank you so much for this wonderful and encouraging review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I,like this nonet ....well done....I like the art work
I also love the calm serene descriptions....
Well done............
God bless

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

And blessings right back to you.... Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this one.