What Will It Take
Happy Birthday! One Voice of Many, Many, Many28 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
OH Michael, this is a wonderful Birthday poem for Evelyn...what words...to see the worst and yet be the best...Love this!!! and the picture is perfect...love Roses...Luff Ya Linda xxoo
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OH Michael, this is a wonderful Birthday poem for Evelyn...what words...to see the worst and yet be the best...Love this!!! and the picture is perfect...love Roses...Luff Ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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So happy you like it. I hope she does too! She is an awesome gal. Thank you much, mikey
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yes she is...xxoo
Comment from Nosha17
That feisty lady deserves all the adulation she gets. This is a great tribute poem to her. It shows the warmth of feeling and respect that Miss Evelyn commands by her show of bravery. You have made excellent choice of words and imagery and its message was loud and clear. Well-written. Faye
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That feisty lady deserves all the adulation she gets. This is a great tribute poem to her. It shows the warmth of feeling and respect that Miss Evelyn commands by her show of bravery. You have made excellent choice of words and imagery and its message was loud and clear. Well-written. Faye
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much. I hope she likes it too!! mikey
Comment from Spitfire
Wow! This is so perfect for Evelyn.
What will it take to make you break? Yes, that' what I wondered all through the story. What a marvelous last line. Her signature words.
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Wow! This is so perfect for Evelyn.
What will it take to make you break? Yes, that' what I wondered all through the story. What a marvelous last line. Her signature words.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I am happy you liked it. She is quite a lady that is for sure. I hope she likes it. I also hope you are doing well and taking care of yourself! mikey
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Trickery of the eye, the rose & shade of pink does this beauty justice. I'm on cloud nine, think i will pop a couple acid pills and dance in the garden. Hope I don't disturb the hoards of ants amidst the vines in your backyard, #13. This would make a dandy Valentine's poem, for that special lady. Wish you luck in the contest, can I vote or is it a closed booth??? I like questions, too??? funning, Mikey, your a clown too? arn't you???? wackydo, shucks, i'm out of sixes but I think I'm old enough to vote?
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Trickery of the eye, the rose & shade of pink does this beauty justice. I'm on cloud nine, think i will pop a couple acid pills and dance in the garden. Hope I don't disturb the hoards of ants amidst the vines in your backyard, #13. This would make a dandy Valentine's poem, for that special lady. Wish you luck in the contest, can I vote or is it a closed booth??? I like questions, too??? funning, Mikey, your a clown too? arn't you???? wackydo, shucks, i'm out of sixes but I think I'm old enough to vote?
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I remember when I could vote, go to war and drive but, I couldn't have a drink. hahaha. I made up for it though! I hope she likes it. A most cool and tough lady. I am more of a stationary singing mime really. mikey
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I knew you was a lover boy ... good going! Check out Hungry like the wolf' after you catch up, don't feel obligated, thought you might like? bottoms up!!!
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I knew you was a lover boy ... good going! Check out Hungry like the wolf' after you catch up, don't feel obligated, thought you might like? bottoms up!!!
Comment from Deniz22
Great poem, ode, to a wonderful sister. Your summation is just tops! But, you tell us everyday
that goes by
there is no force
that makes me cry
"God loves you, and so do I".
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Great poem, ode, to a wonderful sister. Your summation is just tops! But, you tell us everyday
that goes by
there is no force
that makes me cry
"God loves you, and so do I".
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I am so pleased that you find it worthy. Thank you so much!! mikey
Comment from Sasha
What a marvelous tribute to a brave woman. YOu have gone and done it with this one, you made me cry. Not just little tears streaming down my cheeks, but a lump in my throat choking on sobs fighting to break through. This is the best one I've read yet. Thank you for your talent and maybe one day you'll write one for me. I promise not cry if you do...lol
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What a marvelous tribute to a brave woman. YOu have gone and done it with this one, you made me cry. Not just little tears streaming down my cheeks, but a lump in my throat choking on sobs fighting to break through. This is the best one I've read yet. Thank you for your talent and maybe one day you'll write one for me. I promise not cry if you do...lol
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I am so touched that this moved you so much. Of course I will write one for you one day. I promise. I am so happy you liked this. She is one tough lady. I hope she likes it too. Thank you so much, mikey
Comment from Darkhorse555
so true these words from the beautiful pictured rose tell us everyday that goes by there is no force that makes me cry "God loves you, and so do I".excellently penned dear friend
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so true these words from the beautiful pictured rose tell us everyday that goes by there is no force that makes me cry "God loves you, and so do I".excellently penned dear friend
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Glad you liked it. I hope she does too, mikey
Comment from Dawn Munro
Mikey, this is fantastic! What a truly remarkable free verse tribute you have penned to our wonderful FanStory friend, Miss Evelyn. It brought tears to my eyes! (Still no sixes...sigh...)
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Mikey, this is fantastic! What a truly remarkable free verse tribute you have penned to our wonderful FanStory friend, Miss Evelyn. It brought tears to my eyes! (Still no sixes...sigh...)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I am so touched that it affected you so. Thank you so much. Your praise is worth a sky full of stars, mikey
Comment from Bina1
Oh how I agree, what a fine writer she is! I only regret she had to live her story to tell it. A wonderful poem, I'll bet she is smiling!
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Oh how I agree, what a fine writer she is! I only regret she had to live her story to tell it. A wonderful poem, I'll bet she is smiling!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Yes, what an excellent point. It is a shame that she had to suffer like that to write about it. I am so pleased you found this to be worthy. Thank you so very much!! mikey
Comment from Sankey
Top poem mate to a wonderful lady. I am sure she will get a real blessing from all these tributes and birthday wishes. Should have done something myself forget when all this is supposed to happen. Well done buddy. She deserves all this and more! NO SPAGS! Wow!
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Top poem mate to a wonderful lady. I am sure she will get a real blessing from all these tributes and birthday wishes. Should have done something myself forget when all this is supposed to happen. Well done buddy. She deserves all this and more! NO SPAGS! Wow!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I just stumbled across it under contests. Glad you liked it. She is an amazing gal, that is for sure. There is a prose contest too. Not sure if there are any spots left or not. I thought they would just have a book for everyone or something. Oh well.
