The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Destiny's Cradle"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from lakeport
Destiny's cradle, indeed beautiful nature, That's a beautiful expressed story poem,very nice rhyming and flow like the river, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
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Destiny's cradle, indeed beautiful nature, That's a beautiful expressed story poem,very nice rhyming and flow like the river, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thanks for a wonderful review of this one. :-) Carolyn
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your welcome Carolyn.Hugs!Lakeport.
Could you please review my poem "Ttust And Believe" Thank you,
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem
it truly touched my heart. Each line I read is so true about the currents of life how it flows just like a river,
Than you for sharing.
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I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem
it truly touched my heart. Each line I read is so true about the currents of life how it flows just like a river,
Than you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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You are very welcome misscookie, I am glad the poem touched you. That river scene is about 10 miles from our home. :-)Carolyn
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The photo was so lovely
Until next time.
Comment from Spitfire
A lovely spiritual poem that captures the rough journey we are on. Great use of metaphor.
Rough, rapid falls ahead of you
River rushes, twist and turn
Turbulence swells and troubles churn
This definitely makes the end look good!
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A lovely spiritual poem that captures the rough journey we are on. Great use of metaphor.
Rough, rapid falls ahead of you
River rushes, twist and turn
Turbulence swells and troubles churn
This definitely makes the end look good!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thanks Shari for this great review. Life can give us quite a ride. :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
yes life does have its ups and down and trials and tribulations and then come the lull an up hill battle begings again and the the end of the journy greets us with compassion as we drift off to heavens gate
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yes life does have its ups and down and trials and tribulations and then come the lull an up hill battle begings again and the the end of the journy greets us with compassion as we drift off to heavens gate
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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What wonderful comments, thank you, Carolyn
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welcome
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem from the author in this post. Rivers are very special places indeed. They have sparked the imaginations of people since the beginning of time.
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This is an interesting poem from the author in this post. Rivers are very special places indeed. They have sparked the imaginations of people since the beginning of time.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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That is true, nature is our best inspiration. Thanks Tomes, Carolyn
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My pleasure.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem. It's written very well with great rhyming. It is interesting all the way through. I really enjoyed reading it and also your author notes. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work.
Kat
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem. It's written very well with great rhyming. It is interesting all the way through. I really enjoyed reading it and also your author notes. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work.
Kat
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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And thank you Kat for reading and enjoying. Have a wonderful Sunday. Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
For the rivers bank on either side
of sparkling waters deep and wide
Portray a life-scene at it's best
Oh faithful one, you've earned your rest
An extremely wonderful picture and write girl. Beautiful quatrais play a part in your telling of this.
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For the rivers bank on either side
of sparkling waters deep and wide
Portray a life-scene at it's best
Oh faithful one, you've earned your rest
An extremely wonderful picture and write girl. Beautiful quatrais play a part in your telling of this.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Am I growing up to be good, like you? Thank you Pam for all your lovely reviews and encouragement. :-) Carolyn
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Yeah you are. LOL.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Carolyn,
A very nicely written poem, with great imagery. Love the title! Love the metaphor ... rushing waters of life. We never know what's around the next bend, do we?! :)
Fave line ... "Shore up resolve and strength anew
Rough, rapid falls ahead of you".
Hugs,
Connie
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Hi Carolyn,
A very nicely written poem, with great imagery. Love the title! Love the metaphor ... rushing waters of life. We never know what's around the next bend, do we?! :)
Fave line ... "Shore up resolve and strength anew
Rough, rapid falls ahead of you".
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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What a sweet review. Thank you for it, glad you enjoyed the poem Connie. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Smoothiecool
beautiful picture
your chosen words allows the reader to see and feel the love you portray from the lord and like the river banks he cradles you as you travel life's journey like the flowing waters
the rhyme works for this poem
flows well easy read
cheers SC
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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beautiful picture
your chosen words allows the reader to see and feel the love you portray from the lord and like the river banks he cradles you as you travel life's journey like the flowing waters
the rhyme works for this poem
flows well easy read
cheers SC
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thanks for the insightful comments and encouragement. What would we do without the Lord? :-) Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
"For the rivers bank on either side of sparkling waters deep and wide Portray a life-scene at it's best Oh faithful one, you've earned your rest" - This last verse is simply stunning in the depth of faith and love it conveys to the reader. This is a beautifully written piece that flows wonderfully, like the river, and elevates the reader to new heights. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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"For the rivers bank on either side of sparkling waters deep and wide Portray a life-scene at it's best Oh faithful one, you've earned your rest" - This last verse is simply stunning in the depth of faith and love it conveys to the reader. This is a beautifully written piece that flows wonderfully, like the river, and elevates the reader to new heights. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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I appreciate you as usual for the wonderful words you share with me. I always feel that you have genuinely understood and enjoyed what I write. Love, Carolyn