A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Raven's Fare"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from SteveY
Another excellent piece of creative and talented writing my friend. Love the story too that is told in your author notes, but your poem gives one the feel anyway.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Another excellent piece of creative and talented writing my friend. Love the story too that is told in your author notes, but your poem gives one the feel anyway.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much, Steve, I sincerely appreciate that!
Comment from A Jesterstear
I wish I had a six, sorry none left. I must say, your work goes beyond poetry to individual works of art. Yet again another great poem with sound effects. Congratulations on your recent win as well. AJ.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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I wish I had a six, sorry none left. I must say, your work goes beyond poetry to individual works of art. Yet again another great poem with sound effects. Congratulations on your recent win as well. AJ.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review and well-wishes, AJ. They are much appreciated!
Comment from Cookie333
So very glad that I am safe and secure here on our 'hill' Dean. I did enjoy the sound effects with this one my friend. I need to go check something...I think the septic might be plugged (no 'stinky' here I hope)
thanks my friend,
karen
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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So very glad that I am safe and secure here on our 'hill' Dean. I did enjoy the sound effects with this one my friend. I need to go check something...I think the septic might be plugged (no 'stinky' here I hope)
thanks my friend,
karen
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Hah, thank you Karen, I hope all is well with that drain! Good luck with that, LOL!
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I remember that one Dean, I forgot about that booth, happy to support...
karen
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is another dark and disturbing tale that the author has created with this piece of writing. The writer tells a gruesome tale to the reader. The white man could have learned a lot from the native Americans, the Cherokee in this case.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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This is another dark and disturbing tale that the author has created with this piece of writing. The writer tells a gruesome tale to the reader. The white man could have learned a lot from the native Americans, the Cherokee in this case.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks a million, Tomes. I agree, the Native American Indian could have helped us out a great deal, if we would have allowed them to.
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Yes indeed.
Comment from christopherjl
Well this is a lot of fun and really haunting. I enjoyed it thoroughly! Thank you for sharing your piece. I have nothing to add to fix it or change it. Christopher.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Well this is a lot of fun and really haunting. I enjoyed it thoroughly! Thank you for sharing your piece. I have nothing to add to fix it or change it. Christopher.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much, Christopher, I am very glad that you enjoyed it, my friend!
Comment from Darkhorse555
invading dreams on cursed ground you draw out quite the piece evil seeps out in the moons shadows a raven calls out beautifully penned dear friend
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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invading dreams on cursed ground you draw out quite the piece evil seeps out in the moons shadows a raven calls out beautifully penned dear friend
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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Thanks very much, DH, I really appreciate it!
Comment from JW
This is a very well written, entertaining and informative poem. It easily holds one's attention. Good job.
Reading this, I have to admit, did bring memories of a time many years ago when I used to live in Wyoming.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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This is a very well written, entertaining and informative poem. It easily holds one's attention. Good job.
Reading this, I have to admit, did bring memories of a time many years ago when I used to live in Wyoming.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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Thanks for reading and reviewing it for me, Jonathon. I appreciate it, sincerely...
Comment from ragamuffin
"Never goad the devil." Excellent advice actually. The piece certainly has an ominous feel to it and is artfully written. I can' help but to apply the horror legend to "regular" people and life... what's presented during the "sunshine" and what really lurks in the dark of people's minds. Excellent piece.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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"Never goad the devil." Excellent advice actually. The piece certainly has an ominous feel to it and is artfully written. I can' help but to apply the horror legend to "regular" people and life... what's presented during the "sunshine" and what really lurks in the dark of people's minds. Excellent piece.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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You're very wise, ragamuffin! Thanks for the great, spot-on review!
Comment from Mastery
I coulda swore, I reviewed this one already, Dean? I am definitely losing it. I will be 74 in a couple of weeks. Could age have anything to do with it? LOL
Anyway I love your work, and this poetry is no exception..."The devil and his dark minions mourning"
Whew! Good write, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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I coulda swore, I reviewed this one already, Dean? I am definitely losing it. I will be 74 in a couple of weeks. Could age have anything to do with it? LOL
Anyway I love your work, and this poetry is no exception..."The devil and his dark minions mourning"
Whew! Good write, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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Seventy-four? Well, just like fine wine, we only get better with age, right? (LOL)
Thanks for the wonderful review, Bob!
Comment from JonnyRhymes
This is a well-written horror poem full of powerful and evocative imagery. An interesting genre and certainly one that lends itself to poetry. Your historical references help to add a mystical, mythical element too. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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This is a well-written horror poem full of powerful and evocative imagery. An interesting genre and certainly one that lends itself to poetry. Your historical references help to add a mystical, mythical element too. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much, Jonny, I am very happy that you enjoyed this!