The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Twilight Cinquain"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
15 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
God just thought of everything by creating the night, when all can quite down and we can rest/recharge for the challenges of the next day. very nice poem/ God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
God just thought of everything by creating the night, when all can quite down and we can rest/recharge for the challenges of the next day. very nice poem/ God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much Ms Evelyn, I hope you are doing well these days. Love you
Comment from w.j.debi
Such a peaceful and joyful message. Twilight is a beautiful time of day and you have capture its mood well. Good job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
Such a peaceful and joyful message. Twilight is a beautiful time of day and you have capture its mood well. Good job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind comments.
Comment from Curly Girly
Oh, this is so nice...
Calm now
The day is past
Twilight is upon us
Gods' grace of peaceful rest is near
Sleep well
Lovely, soft, peaceful words to soothe the soul and mind.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
Oh, this is so nice...
Calm now
The day is past
Twilight is upon us
Gods' grace of peaceful rest is near
Sleep well
Lovely, soft, peaceful words to soothe the soul and mind.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thanks Nicole for this lovely review.
Comment from l.raven
Very nicely written...And I love the wording...It is in the night that all is quiet and peace can be heard...Love your and the picture perfect...
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
Very nicely written...And I love the wording...It is in the night that all is quiet and peace can be heard...Love your and the picture perfect...
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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I appreciate your great review, glad you liked the poem and the picture.
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Your so welcome...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A nice, vivid depiction and portrayal of visual about twilight and how graceful and gift from God it has been, so peaceful and calm, moments for rest and retirement and relaxation and sleep, I enjoyed. 04/1017
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
A nice, vivid depiction and portrayal of visual about twilight and how graceful and gift from God it has been, so peaceful and calm, moments for rest and retirement and relaxation and sleep, I enjoyed. 04/1017
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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I am so happy you enjoyed this one. Thank you also for the wonderful rating.