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Comment from steevie
The talent factor of this song is off the charts, Mike. You have an amazing ability to zero in on patterns that engage the reader and to see right into your soul.
nicely done, I love this song that you penned
steve
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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The talent factor of this song is off the charts, Mike. You have an amazing ability to zero in on patterns that engage the reader and to see right into your soul.
nicely done, I love this song that you penned
steve
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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wonderful words to here. very encouraging and appreciated. thank you very kindly, mike
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you're welcome, Mike
steve
Comment from CR Delport
Haha, you have such a wonderful sense of humour. This is a well written poem that is a fitting tribute to a special lady. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Haha, you have such a wonderful sense of humour. This is a well written poem that is a fitting tribute to a special lady. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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thank you very much. luck of the Irish! mike
Comment from Sankey
What a beautiful poem. I hope you guys still have a wonderful time together. Nice photo. Is there a tune for the song? No spags for once that's good huh!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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What a beautiful poem. I hope you guys still have a wonderful time together. Nice photo. Is there a tune for the song? No spags for once that's good huh!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Yes. There is a tune. Maybe I will add it one day if I can figure it out. Glad you liked it. mike
Comment from Liz Dunbee
This is a beautifully worded piece. Wish you could sing it for us. I love real life love stories and I am glad you have one to tell. I loved the words and the picture is charming.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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This is a beautifully worded piece. Wish you could sing it for us. I love real life love stories and I am glad you have one to tell. I loved the words and the picture is charming.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. Maybe I will figure out how to add the music to this one of these days. mike
Comment from Sueellen11
Thank is a lovely picture of you and your lady fair,,,of course she still looks as beautiful to you as the day you met,,, I have not noticed any change in my hubby in all these years,,, can't say the same about me,,hee hee,,, great anniversary song for your lady fair,,,blessings,,,sueellen
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Thank is a lovely picture of you and your lady fair,,,of course she still looks as beautiful to you as the day you met,,, I have not noticed any change in my hubby in all these years,,, can't say the same about me,,hee hee,,, great anniversary song for your lady fair,,,blessings,,,sueellen
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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we are in the same lovely boat then. glad you liked this. nice to be a writer when you've no funds for a proper gift. ha! mike
Comment from FrannyG
Nice song lyrics again, Mike, with some really lovely lines like 'a crystal eagle soars/ above the tears'. 'travelors' should be 'ers' and in Oz it has two 'l's! Nice writing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Nice song lyrics again, Mike, with some really lovely lines like 'a crystal eagle soars/ above the tears'. 'travelors' should be 'ers' and in Oz it has two 'l's! Nice writing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Oh yeah. 'ers' I always do that. glad you liked this one. one of the advantages of being a writer/musician. when you are broke you can write a song for an anniversary gift. mike
Comment from tbacha58
where truth is kept within
for only you
for only me
through the years
oh, it is one path
one journey
one love
through the years
that is a beautiful respect to your wife, and the true love, I enjoyed very much reading that deep heartfelt poem. Bless u both. Terry
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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where truth is kept within
for only you
for only me
through the years
oh, it is one path
one journey
one love
through the years
that is a beautiful respect to your wife, and the true love, I enjoyed very much reading that deep heartfelt poem. Bless u both. Terry
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Lovely thoughts and comments. Thank you from the both of us. Mike
Comment from songbyrd
what a beautiful sentiment of love.. through the years, above the tears..that's when you know if it's destined to be forever..not only there in the good, but when the hard times come.. and btw, you have a pretty wife.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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what a beautiful sentiment of love.. through the years, above the tears..that's when you know if it's destined to be forever..not only there in the good, but when the hard times come.. and btw, you have a pretty wife.
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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She's a cutie huh. I covered her eyes and told her I was Tom Petty. By the time she found out it was too late. She should have known better than to mess with a poet!! mikey
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A wonderful tribute to a beautiful woman.
I love the was is sounds and would have loved to hear it in music form.
The flow would have to be beautiful
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A wonderful tribute to a beautiful woman.
I love the was is sounds and would have loved to hear it in music form.
The flow would have to be beautiful
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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If I can ever figure out how to do it I will add the music one of these days. So, pleased that you liked this. Thank you so much. mike