Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Obligation in love is evident, whatever the relation, one has to fulfil obligation to keep the relation going on, there is no selfishness in growing a love relation, a good emotional state is voiced, nice. 10/924

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

a very thoughtful review indeed. most appreciated. thank you very much. interesting and poetic response in its own right. mike

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This Emotions writing prompt entry is full of the emotions of frustrations of love unrequited and offers a masquerade of the appearance of love, but the real love is someone else. Creative. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

thank you so much. very thoughtful review. I am happy to take that as my prize. much appreciated.

Comment from twowheels

Exceptional

Thank you for spending some intimate time expressing an all too common, but little discussed emotion. An unusual love poem.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

thank you for your stunning review. I just wanted to go somewhere else. I am so delighted that you acknowledge and appreciate that. happy as a clam, who I understand are a very jolly bunch indeed. much thanks.