The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Eagles rise"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
19 total reviews
Comment from n.rosej.
Very good Mono-rhyme! Flows throughout the poem, no 'forced rhyme's. nice pic and background to match; wonderful topic and message!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Very good Mono-rhyme! Flows throughout the poem, no 'forced rhyme's. nice pic and background to match; wonderful topic and message!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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What a wonderful review and six star rating. Thanks for everything. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from RYME4U
Well written. The words are well chosen. This is descriptive of eagles and their behavior. Good spiritual message here, too. Good rhythm.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Well written. The words are well chosen. This is descriptive of eagles and their behavior. Good spiritual message here, too. Good rhythm.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for enjoying this one and getting the message. :-)
Comment from vapros
Your clever poem should be a competitive entry in the contest mentioned. Your reference to the eagle, coupled with your advice to lean on a higher power, combine to present a good read. Well done.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Your clever poem should be a competitive entry in the contest mentioned. Your reference to the eagle, coupled with your advice to lean on a higher power, combine to present a good read. Well done.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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How very kind of you. I appreciate your review and words of encouragement.
Comment from 9999pool
A magnificently great mono rhyme write about the story of life in our faith and belief of God.
Like the soaring eagles we are just as graceful if not more in our dealings with life.
We can be rest assured everything had been planned by God and we just have to soar with the eagles and ride the test flight out for good measure.
Do not feel depressed but try to fly high with flying rainbow colors. Don't let the draft catch us falling swiftly down!
Great write in a spiritual truth about God and how we should view life with a positive outlook.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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A magnificently great mono rhyme write about the story of life in our faith and belief of God.
Like the soaring eagles we are just as graceful if not more in our dealings with life.
We can be rest assured everything had been planned by God and we just have to soar with the eagles and ride the test flight out for good measure.
Do not feel depressed but try to fly high with flying rainbow colors. Don't let the draft catch us falling swiftly down!
Great write in a spiritual truth about God and how we should view life with a positive outlook.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ritchie for the wonderful review and comments. I appreciate your time and all that you have said. I enjoyed reading what you wrote almost as much as I did writing
'Eagles rise'. :-)
Comment from allborn66
This is a very nice entry. A few are near rhymes - I don't know how closely that will be judged. I loved the use of form that you had. The theme is clear. The words are very expressive.
Barbara
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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This is a very nice entry. A few are near rhymes - I don't know how closely that will be judged. I loved the use of form that you had. The theme is clear. The words are very expressive.
Barbara
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you Barbara, I appreciate your fine thoughts. I am pleased you found the theme of the poem to be clear.
Comment from Leineco
Nicely done..despite mono-rhyme's penchant for becoming predictable and often boring, you have used the rhyme well, and I never felt you were struggling to keep the -est sound going. :-)
Also, you told an inspiring tale :-)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Nicely done..despite mono-rhyme's penchant for becoming predictable and often boring, you have used the rhyme well, and I never felt you were struggling to keep the -est sound going. :-)
Also, you told an inspiring tale :-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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What a nice review. I appreciate your critique, it means a lot to me.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This follows the monorhyme pattern throughout all stanzas, according to contest criteria, and it has a nice rhythm and flow as well. The repeated two lines at the end is a nice final touch. [Tiny nitpick: In third stanza, "woe's" need no apostrophe.] Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercere
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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This follows the monorhyme pattern throughout all stanzas, according to contest criteria, and it has a nice rhythm and flow as well. The repeated two lines at the end is a nice final touch. [Tiny nitpick: In third stanza, "woe's" need no apostrophe.] Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercere
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks Jeanie, woe is me, I'll fix the woes. It is great that you took the time to edit, I appreciate you. Happy you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Janet Foor
For this poem you are blessed
I want to say that I'm impressed
The world can tell that I confessed
You should win the new contest.
You can see why I didn't enter the contest.
Good luck. You did a great job.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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For this poem you are blessed
I want to say that I'm impressed
The world can tell that I confessed
You should win the new contest.
You can see why I didn't enter the contest.
Good luck. You did a great job.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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And so did you. I also am impressed, there may still be spots left. Thank you for the great poetic review and that you liked it.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-crafted writing as great lessons can be learned from nature;
An analogy of reaching our dreams as mighty wings soar into eternal horizons.
God indeed has created a treasure trove of wonderful sights.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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A well-crafted writing as great lessons can be learned from nature;
An analogy of reaching our dreams as mighty wings soar into eternal horizons.
God indeed has created a treasure trove of wonderful sights.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and understanding of this poem. I am grateful you liked it.
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You're welcome.