A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "~Handwriting on the Wall~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
44 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
Honestly I don't know what to say about this one. That's why I gave it a 5 star rating cause I'm left dumbfounded
good job at that.
lulube
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Honestly I don't know what to say about this one. That's why I gave it a 5 star rating cause I'm left dumbfounded
good job at that.
lulube
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Hah, well, at least I accomplished something today, LOL...
Thanks, Lulube!
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lol
nice to have an effect on people?
lol
lulube your welcome
Comment from lindalcreel
The only person who has the right to decide about death is God. After working as a nurse for so many years, I have been in my share of code blues, too many to count. Sometimes those elective surgeries, should have never been done. Unfortunately, there are many more problems in healthcare and it's not looking good for the elderly. Hospitals used to care about medicine, now they are a business and care about the bottom line. Time to get off the soap box. lol
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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The only person who has the right to decide about death is God. After working as a nurse for so many years, I have been in my share of code blues, too many to count. Sometimes those elective surgeries, should have never been done. Unfortunately, there are many more problems in healthcare and it's not looking good for the elderly. Hospitals used to care about medicine, now they are a business and care about the bottom line. Time to get off the soap box. lol
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Your absolutely right about that, Linda. Thank you!
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Comment from barkingdog
Time will come when people are allowed to die and not kept alive for whatever reason. I vote it's for profit not humanitarian reasons.
Very disturbing voice. Sounds like a demon or death itself. A premonition of things to come perhaps.
Perfect rhyme and even tempo.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Time will come when people are allowed to die and not kept alive for whatever reason. I vote it's for profit not humanitarian reasons.
Very disturbing voice. Sounds like a demon or death itself. A premonition of things to come perhaps.
Perfect rhyme and even tempo.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review, BD!
Comment from pickthorn
This is more of a commentary rather than poetry. A very important subject indeed. A warning about what our medical
health care will be like under Obamacare. A shocking revelation.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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This is more of a commentary rather than poetry. A very important subject indeed. A warning about what our medical
health care will be like under Obamacare. A shocking revelation.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks, pickthorn, you got my meaning to a tee!
Comment from barleygirl
Thank you for the explanation in your notes, without which, I would've never been able to get a fraction of the meaning out of your poem. It's such a thought-provoking subject & one that you've managed to convey with mainly a sense of "feeling" rather than "thinking" in your graphically image-filled piece. As always, great work!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the explanation in your notes, without which, I would've never been able to get a fraction of the meaning out of your poem. It's such a thought-provoking subject & one that you've managed to convey with mainly a sense of "feeling" rather than "thinking" in your graphically image-filled piece. As always, great work!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, as always, barleygirl. I certainly appreciate it!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Dean,
a brilliant presentation allowed me to dwell into the horror of what your words contained. Comatosed souls waiting to be judged on merit... But who has the fortitude to call the hard call? You,... me? I hope not.
Wow, my friend what a smack in the face with a wet fish! I'm just going to ostrich this one and not try to think about it until necessity brings cause to do so... But wow, I'm still going back to re-read, now that's gotta be a good sign, doesn't it?
Kindest thoughts,
James
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Hi Dean,
a brilliant presentation allowed me to dwell into the horror of what your words contained. Comatosed souls waiting to be judged on merit... But who has the fortitude to call the hard call? You,... me? I hope not.
Wow, my friend what a smack in the face with a wet fish! I'm just going to ostrich this one and not try to think about it until necessity brings cause to do so... But wow, I'm still going back to re-read, now that's gotta be a good sign, doesn't it?
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks, James, and yes, my friend, it is a very good sign, indeed!
Comment from NicciFaye
Oh, you paint such a wick picture...I love it...always brilliant and beyond creative with what you hack up for us readers to dwell upon.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Oh, you paint such a wick picture...I love it...always brilliant and beyond creative with what you hack up for us readers to dwell upon.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, Nicci. Wow, five reviews from you in one day. I am truly flattered, and I know without a doubt that JM will be too!
Comment from country ranch writer
ALWAYS CHECK YOUR MEDICAL WISHES BEFORE GOING TO THE HOSPITAL I REFUSE TO BE A GUINEA PIG TO BE PROBED AND CUT ON FOR SCIENCE---------------
they posted two Halloween contests right up your alley
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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ALWAYS CHECK YOUR MEDICAL WISHES BEFORE GOING TO THE HOSPITAL I REFUSE TO BE A GUINEA PIG TO BE PROBED AND CUT ON FOR SCIENCE---------------
they posted two Halloween contests right up your alley
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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You got that right, country! Thanks very much for the great review. Thanks for the heads-up on those contests too. I entered them both, LOL...
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YEAH
Comment from forestport12
powerful and gripping poem. So much here has a two-edged meaning. I like how you take depravity and help define it and use it as a vehicle, not dragging the reader along but giving him glimpse of himself on the other side of the wall where the blood runs.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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powerful and gripping poem. So much here has a two-edged meaning. I like how you take depravity and help define it and use it as a vehicle, not dragging the reader along but giving him glimpse of himself on the other side of the wall where the blood runs.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, foresport12. I'm very glad to see that you've grasped the feeling I was trying for here...
Comment from Hitcher
A dark thought provoking offering for sure friend, the writing has been on the wall for a very long time. Money and those with it seem to get preference these days though, if you don't have it flick a coin, heads you have a chance, tails goodbye :) Well presented as always Dean and a great poem!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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A dark thought provoking offering for sure friend, the writing has been on the wall for a very long time. Money and those with it seem to get preference these days though, if you don't have it flick a coin, heads you have a chance, tails goodbye :) Well presented as always Dean and a great poem!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Yes, it most certainly has, Hitch. Thanks for your awesome review, my friend!