We'll meet Again
Young Italian boy helps US soldiers in WW2.17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
AWw, Kay, that was so sad, and such a lovely ending, what a lovely story. You wrote it beautifully and so vividly. I havenīt seen the film, but if it was half as good as the way you wrote it, I would love to see it. This is a brilliant entry for the contest, I donīt know whether I could write one in time, or any where near as good as yours. Well done my dear friend, I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra
I will write you an e-mail later, it has been a hard few days and I just havenīt had time to come on here as much, let alone write! xxxx
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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AWw, Kay, that was so sad, and such a lovely ending, what a lovely story. You wrote it beautifully and so vividly. I havenīt seen the film, but if it was half as good as the way you wrote it, I would love to see it. This is a brilliant entry for the contest, I donīt know whether I could write one in time, or any where near as good as yours. Well done my dear friend, I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra
I will write you an e-mail later, it has been a hard few days and I just havenīt had time to come on here as much, let alone write! xxxx
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Hello Blossom, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed it. Get the DVD out - it's called Santa Anna. Have written to you. Love, Kay XX
Comment from writerwish
This is very well told. The mysterious boy was a highlight for me. Story kept my interest all the way through. Just enough characters for this short piece. The intenseness of the scene of dead soldiers was done with compassion and fear. War is so horrid. I enjoyed the ultimate love story.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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This is very well told. The mysterious boy was a highlight for me. Story kept my interest all the way through. Just enough characters for this short piece. The intenseness of the scene of dead soldiers was done with compassion and fear. War is so horrid. I enjoyed the ultimate love story.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you friend, glad you liked my story; mainly a poet but I thought I would try a short story - blessings, Kay.
Comment from Cookie333
I could read your writing all day my friend. I think I must have missed the orange grove/daughter reference though. I shall re-read when I get a chance (I shall bookcase this one)
War tends to make or break us, sort of like life I guess.
thank you and good luck,
karen
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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I could read your writing all day my friend. I think I must have missed the orange grove/daughter reference though. I shall re-read when I get a chance (I shall bookcase this one)
War tends to make or break us, sort of like life I guess.
thank you and good luck,
karen
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed the story. I don't write stories much, more a poet. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, aussie, you did an excellent job writing this story about the man who found his lost italian love after 30 years and found he had a daughter. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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this is very well written, aussie, you did an excellent job writing this story about the man who found his lost italian love after 30 years and found he had a daughter. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Hello dear friend, Thanks so much for reading - glad you liked the story. Thanks for the good luck wishes. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Wow, This says fiction but your author's notes make us feel like portions of it is truth. Excellent piece and nothing we can see that needs changing with it. God girl, you got that writing bug. God loves you and se do too.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Wow, This says fiction but your author's notes make us feel like portions of it is truth. Excellent piece and nothing we can see that needs changing with it. God girl, you got that writing bug. God loves you and se do too.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Evelyn and Janie (slave writer) thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed it. I saw the film called Santa Anna it moved me to write my version. Now behave yourselves girls! Love, Kay.
Comment from country ranch writer
NICE JOB NICE ENDING AND I TOO HAVE SEEN JUST ABOUT ALL THE WAR MOVIES FROM YEARS AND YEARS AGO.SO I THINK YOU NAILED IT WITH YOUR OWN HEART FELT STORY OF LONG AGO
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NICE JOB NICE ENDING AND I TOO HAVE SEEN JUST ABOUT ALL THE WAR MOVIES FROM YEARS AND YEARS AGO.SO I THINK YOU NAILED IT WITH YOUR OWN HEART FELT STORY OF LONG AGO
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Bless you my friend - the original DVD was called Miracle at Santa Anna. It moved me to write my own version. Bless you, Kay.
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WELCOME
Comment from MsHeavens
Very nice story involving people who barely have enough for themselves helping others, help them. Having spent 3 years in Wiesbaden, Germany I can envision what is going on in the story and the type of environment that the shooting occurred on. Very nicely written and the flow was great, everything tied in together. Heroes and Happiness. Nice ending, creative, and a good intro for Part II. No work needed from my view. Great short story!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Very nice story involving people who barely have enough for themselves helping others, help them. Having spent 3 years in Wiesbaden, Germany I can envision what is going on in the story and the type of environment that the shooting occurred on. Very nicely written and the flow was great, everything tied in together. Heroes and Happiness. Nice ending, creative, and a good intro for Part II. No work needed from my view. Great short story!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you friend, I enjoyed writing my version of Miracle at Santa Anna. Can you write about Wiesbaden or is it too painful? Blessings, Kay.
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I will try to write something about Wiesbaden. I have some old poems from when I was there, but nothing new. Nothing but wonderful times and travel throughout Germany, Turkey, Amsterdam, London, etc while I was in the Army. I'll let you know when I do. Thanks for stirring the memories. Have a great night!