5-7-5 poem
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Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Tea for 2,
Your syllable count is perfect in this 5-7-5 poem.
I enjoyed the sentiment and your presentation. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work!
Kim
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Hi Tea for 2,
Your syllable count is perfect in this 5-7-5 poem.
I enjoyed the sentiment and your presentation. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work!
Kim
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Kim, thanks for your thoughtful response...Your review is appreciated. teafor2
Comment from jmdg1954
Wonderfully written, as women grow and mature, having a career and/or becoming mothers, to me it's fine to still see her vulnerability. It's human nature.
Great poem and best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Wonderfully written, as women grow and mature, having a career and/or becoming mothers, to me it's fine to still see her vulnerability. It's human nature.
Great poem and best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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John, thanks for your thoughtful review...Your personal remarks and
response appreciated. teafor2
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 entry for the contest. Yes women can be strong and they can also experience disappointments and heartaches
that cause them to react like a little girl, which is what they truly are underneath.
Nancy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 entry for the contest. Yes women can be strong and they can also experience disappointments and heartaches
that cause them to react like a little girl, which is what they truly are underneath.
Nancy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Nancy, thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks...
As a girls dad, I can confirm that. teafor2
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent message in this well written 5/7/5 poem. People do forget the grownups (especially we women) have feelings that can get hurt.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Excellent message in this well written 5/7/5 poem. People do forget the grownups (especially we women) have feelings that can get hurt.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks for the thoughtful comments, Janet and the personal remarks. teafor2
Comment from gramalot8
Very well written 5-7-5 poem. You definitely send a good message within these few short words.
Sometimes in order to feel better, we just have to cry like a little girl. Then afterwards we can put on our big girl panties again and carry on.
Thank you for sharing this message with us.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Very well written 5-7-5 poem. You definitely send a good message within these few short words.
Sometimes in order to feel better, we just have to cry like a little girl. Then afterwards we can put on our big girl panties again and carry on.
Thank you for sharing this message with us.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks, gramalot8. Your response is appreciated. teafor2
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Teafor2,
This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem about the real emotions a women goes through. I think we all still have that little girl in us. We as women go through a lot and sometimes we have no one to share those emotions with.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Teafor2,
This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem about the real emotions a women goes through. I think we all still have that little girl in us. We as women go through a lot and sometimes we have no one to share those emotions with.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks Cecilia, for your personal comments and thoughtful response
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
What a lovely 5-7-5 haiku. I like the second line a lot. Then you relate that line so nicely with the final line of being like a girl. I see the strength in this woman. A very nicely done poem. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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What a lovely 5-7-5 haiku. I like the second line a lot. Then you relate that line so nicely with the final line of being like a girl. I see the strength in this woman. A very nicely done poem. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks, Kirsten for your shared sentiments and personal comments...
Your response is appreciated. teafor2
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful, 575 poem and it has a very powerful message. We all must remember that even though we are grown women sometimes we do feel hurts and we do cry so may you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This is a wonderful, 575 poem and it has a very powerful message. We all must remember that even though we are grown women sometimes we do feel hurts and we do cry so may you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your personal remarks, Patricia and thoughtful sentiments. teafor2
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, teafor2.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-You do a good job with the qualities
you see in a woman, and you make
a good comparison with the little
girl who resides within her.
-I think all the qualities you
mention are important for any woman
so she can be her true self.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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-Nice artwork and presentation, teafor2.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-You do a good job with the qualities
you see in a woman, and you make
a good comparison with the little
girl who resides within her.
-I think all the qualities you
mention are important for any woman
so she can be her true self.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Pam, thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks...
Your response is appreciated. teafor2
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You are very welcome, teafor2.
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Comment from royowen
I think it's marvellous when girls grow up, still vulnerable, still able to have those desires and the innocence of youth, it usually means that are comfortable in one's skin, beautifully written My friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I think it's marvellous when girls grow up, still vulnerable, still able to have those desires and the innocence of youth, it usually means that are comfortable in one's skin, beautifully written My friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments, Roy and personal sentiments. Your response is appreciated. teafor2
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Most welcome
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