Why?
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Comment from tbacha58
This is a very very sad poem, but very very nicely written. Each verse has beautiful rhyming. It broke my heart to read of your loss.
Especially not his fault. Terry good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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This is a very very sad poem, but very very nicely written. Each verse has beautiful rhyming. It broke my heart to read of your loss.
Especially not his fault. Terry good luck.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Terry, for your lovely review. I didn't win, but the competition was amazing, the winner was so deserved. :) xsx Sandra
Comment from Darkhorse555
from the picture shadow falling into the horizon golden sunshine you penned through the grief then asked god why a beautiful piece god bless
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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from the picture shadow falling into the horizon golden sunshine you penned through the grief then asked god why a beautiful piece god bless
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your lovely review! :) Sandra
Comment from Gungalo
I felt my heart restrict again
I watched your parents cry
I watched and died a little bit
And then I asked God, 'Why?'
Unfortunately there are no answers. Just an emptiness that takes a long time to go away. Sigh.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I felt my heart restrict again
I watched your parents cry
I watched and died a little bit
And then I asked God, 'Why?'
Unfortunately there are no answers. Just an emptiness that takes a long time to go away. Sigh.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Gungalo, for your lovely review. :)
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh, This is very very sad. Is it true? If so I am very sorry for you. A terrible tragedy to have to live through for one so young and full of dreams. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Oh, This is very very sad. Is it true? If so I am very sorry for you. A terrible tragedy to have to live through for one so young and full of dreams. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Nancy, for your lovely review! :) xxx
Comment from adewpearl
strong use of abcb rhyming including good proximate rhyming like in rasp/last
a dramatic poem of love and love lost far too soon
this will resonate with many readers who have lost a loved one and asked such questions
Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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strong use of abcb rhyming including good proximate rhyming like in rasp/last
a dramatic poem of love and love lost far too soon
this will resonate with many readers who have lost a loved one and asked such questions
Brooke
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Brooke. :)
Comment from wierdgrace
oh my, I cried, this week, my sister and her newborn child died, 22 years ago, and on this day every year, it haunts me, I read this, well written, says it all, and the emotional tears I felt, wow, good luck in this contest,
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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oh my, I cried, this week, my sister and her newborn child died, 22 years ago, and on this day every year, it haunts me, I read this, well written, says it all, and the emotional tears I felt, wow, good luck in this contest,
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I am so sorry, the pain of losing your sister and her child, I just can't begin to imagine the feeling of loss you carry. I also feel sad that my poem has brought on more pain. I wrote this as fiction, but it was based on my own loss of my husband 27 years ago, we had two children, a blessing to me. But I only have to look at them and I see their father. You must think of the happy memories you shared with your sister, that keeps her alive in your heart. Again, I am so very sorry for your loss, and I thank you deeply for sharing this with me. xx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I felt my heart restrict again
I watched your parents cry
I watched and died a little bit
And then I asked God, 'Why?'
oh, this is indeed sad - I hope it's not true to life -- it's so hard to lose a loved-one.
good luck with the contest.
margaret
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I felt my heart restrict again
I watched your parents cry
I watched and died a little bit
And then I asked God, 'Why?'
oh, this is indeed sad - I hope it's not true to life -- it's so hard to lose a loved-one.
good luck with the contest.
margaret
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Margaret, for your lovely review. It is half and half. We were married, and had accomplished some of our dreams. Thank you again.
Comment from chasennov
'Why.' Yes my friend. Well may we ask God WHY? It doesn't help to try and pan out the why's and wherefore's. It is simply called FATE. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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'Why.' Yes my friend. Well may we ask God WHY? It doesn't help to try and pan out the why's and wherefore's. It is simply called FATE. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing my poem! :)
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you're most welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a good entry for the Sad poem contest. It is written in a/b/c/b form and flows very well. Sad story of someone losing the one they love when life held so much for the future. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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This is a good entry for the Sad poem contest. It is written in a/b/c/b form and flows very well. Sad story of someone losing the one they love when life held so much for the future. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Dorothy, for your lovely review! :)
Comment from Zue65
This poem effectively captured the emotion of sadness, of the one left alone, after the death of a loved one, run over and killed by an irresponsible driver, at a time when they are planning of marriage a day before his death. The agony and sorrow is painted well in the words of every lines. Excellent job. God bless.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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This poem effectively captured the emotion of sadness, of the one left alone, after the death of a loved one, run over and killed by an irresponsible driver, at a time when they are planning of marriage a day before his death. The agony and sorrow is painted well in the words of every lines. Excellent job. God bless.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Nassus, for this lovely review! :)