Louise, part 1
Boy tempted by lust and faith37 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Gretchen, a very spicy tale... I love it. You got Louise an Tucker's characters believable and well developed. I'm invested and want to know more about their affair. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Gretchen, a very spicy tale... I love it. You got Louise an Tucker's characters believable and well developed. I'm invested and want to know more about their affair. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thank you again. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I think you've certainly sucked me in. You've certainly got an incredible back log of stories, and quite an impressive catalogue of tales, and this is one of them. I couldn't possibly know where this is headed, I could guess, but I could possibly be wrong, blessjngs Roy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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I think you've certainly sucked me in. You've certainly got an incredible back log of stories, and quite an impressive catalogue of tales, and this is one of them. I couldn't possibly know where this is headed, I could guess, but I could possibly be wrong, blessjngs Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Roy, for this exceptional review. I appreciate the exceptional rating. Gretchen
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Good job,
Comment from damommy
I think there will be trouble before this story ends. I expected him to stalk her, but instead, he came right out with it. She's too brassy for him. No good will come of this.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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I think there will be trouble before this story ends. I expected him to stalk her, but instead, he came right out with it. She's too brassy for him. No good will come of this.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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No good is exactly right. Tucker will never be the same. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
This is good beginning to story about a guilty young man and his encounter and infatuation with an older and more experienced lady who seems to intereting in luring this young guy along. I'll be interested in how Louise plans to handle this.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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This is good beginning to story about a guilty young man and his encounter and infatuation with an older and more experienced lady who seems to intereting in luring this young guy along. I'll be interested in how Louise plans to handle this.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Louise might surprise us but both are going the wrong way down a one way street. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well this could go anywhere Gretchen so you have drawn us in and we await the event here. A fine introduction to a sensual story, or maybe this lad we be dropped like a ton of bricks, who knows, a fine post Gretchen, the power is all in this lady's hands, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Well this could go anywhere Gretchen so you have drawn us in and we await the event here. A fine introduction to a sensual story, or maybe this lad we be dropped like a ton of bricks, who knows, a fine post Gretchen, the power is all in this lady's hands, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. I'm glad you found this interesting. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another excellent and gripping story here, Gretchen! I like the way the detail of the boy, i.e. his age, comes out in the dialogue and the whole story seamlessly evolves rather than having it spoon fed at the beginning. This is such a credible and engaging encounter that I look forward to reading more. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Another excellent and gripping story here, Gretchen! I like the way the detail of the boy, i.e. his age, comes out in the dialogue and the whole story seamlessly evolves rather than having it spoon fed at the beginning. This is such a credible and engaging encounter that I look forward to reading more. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Debbie. I'm so happy you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from pome lover
I had to chuckle at where you left us hanging, and where you left him. I'm surprised at this story from you, but anxious to see how you work it out.
So, off to see if you've posted chapter 2.
Katharine
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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I had to chuckle at where you left us hanging, and where you left him. I'm surprised at this story from you, but anxious to see how you work it out.
So, off to see if you've posted chapter 2.
Katharine
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Posting part 2 tomorrow. I'm glad you liked it. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I'm too weak in the knees to offer very much feedback.
(winky face here)
Forgive me, Jesus, I thought but I knew there was no going back. - maybe a comma after 'thought'?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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I'm too weak in the knees to offer very much feedback.
(winky face here)
Forgive me, Jesus, I thought but I knew there was no going back. - maybe a comma after 'thought'?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thanks, Wayne. Thank you for the grammatical help. Very appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
The adolescent son of a preacher meets a cougar who happens to be, in his eyes, the most beautiful woman he's ever seen.
Do these characters fall out of the sky for you?
This is going to be brilliant! I think you have another posted. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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The adolescent son of a preacher meets a cougar who happens to be, in his eyes, the most beautiful woman he's ever seen.
Do these characters fall out of the sky for you?
This is going to be brilliant! I think you have another posted. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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These characters tend to wake me up at night or talk over the radio in the car. Loud and pushy, most of them. Lol. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there GW. I have been quite ill for some time now, but feel good enough to review tonight. I had to delete 800 to get to this one. I love this story line. It reminds me of my hairdresser when I was 25. I didn't want to follow, but hell held me tight and her perfume made me sweat
Bear
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Hey there GW. I have been quite ill for some time now, but feel good enough to review tonight. I had to delete 800 to get to this one. I love this story line. It reminds me of my hairdresser when I was 25. I didn't want to follow, but hell held me tight and her perfume made me sweat
Bear
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the personal feedback. And thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen