The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Waterfalls"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
26 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
It's hard to critique these short poems.. I should say an uphill battle,
It is a beautiful picture.
Thank you and God bless
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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It's hard to critique these short poems.. I should say an uphill battle,
It is a beautiful picture.
Thank you and God bless
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I like your pun... :-) Glad you read and commented. Thanks , Carolyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Carolyn
With very few words, this poetry speaks an undeniable
truth. The attached photo is a giant mirror that
reflects the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Well Done ~ Carolyn
With very few words, this poetry speaks an undeniable
truth. The attached photo is a giant mirror that
reflects the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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You are welcome and thank you for the wonderful review. Carolyn
Comment from Sagnik Das
Tritely astute write,
Whose subtle flow of wit might
set the world upright !!
- Carolyn, dear friend, how do you like my latest forte - imparting "poetic reviews" ? Funny - isn't it ? LOL .... And ... Oh ! I better hasten now, my Lady ! - Got an exam to sit for yet again tomorrow ! :)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Tritely astute write,
Whose subtle flow of wit might
set the world upright !!
- Carolyn, dear friend, how do you like my latest forte - imparting "poetic reviews" ? Funny - isn't it ? LOL .... And ... Oh ! I better hasten now, my Lady ! - Got an exam to sit for yet again tomorrow ! :)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I think you have replied in a most appropriate 5-7-5 manner. And, I might add, very complimentary to the poem. Thank you for taking time in your busy schedule to read and review. :-)Carolyn
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Ah ! - Returned home just now, Carolyn .... had a triumphant examination ( all by grace of your benediction, of course ! ....)
And here I find now your courteous reply ..... Oh ! what a splendid day I'm having indeed ! - I'm overwhelmed ! - and know not how to thank you in words .... I guess, you're way , way above these mere formal offices of trivial courtesy .... you're someone highly unique - an exalted Lady of refined sensibility.
Accept my pliable respect, Madam, as I herein end for now ... I shall be seeing you again very shortly - Adieu.
:)
Comment from fastdigits
A clever rendition of a
seventeen syllable poem
with of course a truism
that may with the future
turn out not true LOL
Well done
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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A clever rendition of a
seventeen syllable poem
with of course a truism
that may with the future
turn out not true LOL
Well done
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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You are so right, we may have 'whirling' falls instead of 'falling' falls. LOL Thanks for the fun review. Carolyn
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
You brought up a great point. Something that I had never in my lifetime, thought about. Water can flow north and south, east and west but never up hill. This is a very creative thought provoking piece of poetry. The artwork chosen is perfect for this poem. Well done,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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You brought up a great point. Something that I had never in my lifetime, thought about. Water can flow north and south, east and west but never up hill. This is a very creative thought provoking piece of poetry. The artwork chosen is perfect for this poem. Well done,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you Jim for such a great review, I am happy you liked this. It was fun to write. :-) Carolyn
Comment from TheNakedPoet
a great display of gravity cascading down my screen and i must concur with your rhyming satori line
well done on a waterfall of words that simply cannot go uphill
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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a great display of gravity cascading down my screen and i must concur with your rhyming satori line
well done on a waterfall of words that simply cannot go uphill
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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What a neat review, I liked what you said, :-) Carolyn
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lol me too
haha
i'm kidding
i liked what YOU said
VERY clever, poet
Ariana
Comment from GE Parson
I rated this a six, Carolyn,simply because it made me smile.
I have read that water flows both north and south at the equator. Also that one of the planets twirls counter clockwise, while the other six twirls clockwise.
Y'all have a blessed Week-end -Your Friend, Jerry
PS How did Red do with his tests?
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I rated this a six, Carolyn,simply because it made me smile.
I have read that water flows both north and south at the equator. Also that one of the planets twirls counter clockwise, while the other six twirls clockwise.
Y'all have a blessed Week-end -Your Friend, Jerry
PS How did Red do with his tests?
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thanks Jerry for such a wonderful review and enlightening comments. (Red ?test?, not clear what you mean) Have a great day yourself. Carolyn
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I had mentioned missing his writings and he said he had to take time out for school tests.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I loved this and the picture is perfect with the verse. I just can't get over what a really gifted person can say in a few well chosen words. This was such a peaceful statement filled with personal inspiration for me. I truly enjoyed reading it and am so grateful to be able to share it with you.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I loved this and the picture is perfect with the verse. I just can't get over what a really gifted person can say in a few well chosen words. This was such a peaceful statement filled with personal inspiration for me. I truly enjoyed reading it and am so grateful to be able to share it with you.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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What a nice comment. I appreciate you so very much. Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
The photo is marvelous of the waterfall. We have a few in Jersey, but not that large, and they don't go uphill.
My interpretation is that a waterfall is a constant. Cannot be changed. Unlike I'm life, when one has that ability, to change direction and make amends.
Nicely done Carolyn ... John
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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The photo is marvelous of the waterfall. We have a few in Jersey, but not that large, and they don't go uphill.
My interpretation is that a waterfall is a constant. Cannot be changed. Unlike I'm life, when one has that ability, to change direction and make amends.
Nicely done Carolyn ... John
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Good insight John, thanks so much. (Go Cards!!! ) Carolyn
Comment from Ashley Scott
I enjoyed your brief poem, especially the last line which invited this reader to ponder upon deeper meanings beneath the water. Just my impressions. Nicely done and I've no suggestions.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I enjoyed your brief poem, especially the last line which invited this reader to ponder upon deeper meanings beneath the water. Just my impressions. Nicely done and I've no suggestions.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your comments and that you enjoyed this one. Best to you always, Carolyn