Comment from hellion5

Excellent

I'm afraid I'm running out of ways to tell you how much I love this book. And, you're probably tired of hearing it by now, anyway! Well, as tired as a writer can get of such things. Well...nevermind...

Daddy can help us build a snowmouse!'--love it!

Thank you so much for writing this--

Sue



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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012

Thanks Sue! I know what you mean, but we all still love it, don't we. Just so long as it really is good and deserves the lovely reviews. I hope I really do deserve them, I think you would tell me if there is something needing to look at again. I do really value your reviews, thanks again, Sue. xsx

reply by hellion5 on 26-Feb-2012

As far as I'm concerned you deserve it, and yes, I would mention anything I thought could be better. Holding on for the next chapter--

Sue

Comment from patsypats

Excellent

Very clever chilren's poem. I think for the most part the flow is good, got a little draggy a a couple of places, but was an easy to follow plot. How cute to end with "build a snowmouse. excellent rhyming. good job:)

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012

Thank you, patsypats, for your nice review. I know there are lots of times that I get bits wrong, that's when I hope to get some imput to go back and look again. During the time that I have been writing these stories, I have changed lots of words, lines, etc at the suggestion of FanStory reviewers, that is what we come on for. Now I need your help, which bits do I need to tighten up on, I honestly would appreciate your advice. Thank you again, patsy! xsx