Daddy Mouse has an Idea
The little animals are bored32 total reviews
Comment from Christina 201
Lovely whimsical poem that children are sure to enjoy.
Well done. Flows well mostly, with just one hiccup to the easy rhythm. The story carries you so you hardly notice the poetic inspite of the excellent rhymes, that fit perfectly. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Lovely whimsical poem that children are sure to enjoy.
Well done. Flows well mostly, with just one hiccup to the easy rhythm. The story carries you so you hardly notice the poetic inspite of the excellent rhymes, that fit perfectly. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Christina, for you lovely comments. I always like to read reviews that tells me what could be improved. I will re-read it and see if I can sort out that 'hiccup' Thank you. xsx
Comment from Chris Davis
What a fun story poem. I was right there with the joyous children pitching their tent and telling their stories. Thank you for sharing this playful and ultra creative piece.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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What a fun story poem. I was right there with the joyous children pitching their tent and telling their stories. Thank you for sharing this playful and ultra creative piece.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Chris, I value your comments a lot. Thank you. xsx
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Thank YOU... I am humbled that you value my opinion. :)
~Chris
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Sandra. I admire this piece so much. You use such magical phrases and rhyming which paints the most incredible pictures to your reader's eyes. I would give almost anything to be able to create pieces like this for kids. Loved it. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Hi Sandra. I admire this piece so much. You use such magical phrases and rhyming which paints the most incredible pictures to your reader's eyes. I would give almost anything to be able to create pieces like this for kids. Loved it. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much kiwigirl! You always say such nice things, I really look forward to hearing your comments. I have one coming up that I am not to happy with at the moment and I am hoping to get some imput from you all, its such a help when the brain stops!! Thank you,again. xsx
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely fun poem and kiddies will enjoy this poetry you have composed here for us old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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This is an absolutely fun poem and kiddies will enjoy this poetry you have composed here for us old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Chris, I really appreciate your comments! Thank you. xsx
Comment from Anisa-
Hah, this is a very cute poem you have written. Well expressed, good flow. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. I think the kids will enjoy it.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Hah, this is a very cute poem you have written. Well expressed, good flow. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. I think the kids will enjoy it.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Anisai1! I am really pleased you enjoyed it. xsx
Comment from percival86jack
"The children cheered, they all knew they would,
They'd make sure by being especially good!"
A delightful ending to a delightful little story... loved it!
Have you written other children's poems that might share?
Hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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"The children cheered, they all knew they would,
They'd make sure by being especially good!"
A delightful ending to a delightful little story... loved it!
Have you written other children's poems that might share?
Hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Jack! What a wonderful review, I love it when the grown up children like my stories! I have written 4 others in this series, they are under 'Hedgerow Capers,' I am just finishing number 6 which should be ready at the end of the week. One day I am hoping to find someone who might be interested in publishing them, but with so many brilliant childrens story book authors out there, I might not be good enough. But never mind, my grandchildren love them! Thank you again! xxx Sandra.
Comment from rchitwood
Another little story for your book a very nice one. Your story held my attention as I imagined the camping out and camp fire stories. Very creative imagination and smooth flow. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Another little story for your book a very nice one. Your story held my attention as I imagined the camping out and camp fire stories. Very creative imagination and smooth flow. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 29-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Rita. I am glad you liked this, thank you for such a nice review. xsx
Comment from HPicasso
You did such a good job with all the conversations.
A cute story that you weaved into your poem
The wording is such that it be well understood and I had fun reading it too.
This would be a delightful read for children. Congratulation!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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You did such a good job with all the conversations.
A cute story that you weaved into your poem
The wording is such that it be well understood and I had fun reading it too.
This would be a delightful read for children. Congratulation!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you, HPicasso, what a wonderful review! I am so glad you enjoyed it. xsx
Comment from steevie
I'm very pleased with your wonderful poem, Sandra. You captured such a descriptive moment in the lives of little critter who were bored and needed some distraction from otherwise tedious days..
well done
steve
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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I'm very pleased with your wonderful poem, Sandra. You captured such a descriptive moment in the lives of little critter who were bored and needed some distraction from otherwise tedious days..
well done
steve
Comment Written 29-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Steevie, I appreciate it a lot! xsx
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sandra, you are very welcome
steve
Comment from Tiny Owl
This was an excellent story told in rhyme. Very nice descriptive flow. This reminds me of my 'three little mice,' so to speak. Camping memories are the best! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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This was an excellent story told in rhyme. Very nice descriptive flow. This reminds me of my 'three little mice,' so to speak. Camping memories are the best! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Tiny Owl, such lovely comment! Thank you! xsx