Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas

Excellent

This is a strong entry, your style is peculiar and skillful. I especially like the opening splendid sentence. the ending was justified too.

Well done

K

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much K

Comment from RazberryBullet

Excellent

Interesting topic!

Liked these lines: a dream travel agency. The only one without a precise time of arrival or departure.:).. nobody can live like a stubborn wild horse only in the present.

Good job!

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much RazberryBullet, I appreciate your input

Comment from rmdelta

Excellent

apelle,

a wonderfully written poem and a great contest entry, my friend. Great imagery and this should received many votes.

Reggie

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much Reggie

Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Hi apelle,

I enjoyed the story. Interesting and different. I like the idea of the dream travel agency and your right, what would life be without our dreams and memories. The last paragraph sums your thoughts up nicely. Best wishes in the contest and thank you for sharing.

Becky

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much for reading my story and indulging in my flights of fancy

Comment from Deejharrington

Excellent

The best of luck in the contest. I love the idea of a dream travel agency. I can see where this would be very attractive. Especially in the middle of a migraine. But your conculsions are right. We do need our memories, good and bad. They are a part of who we are. I really enjoyed the last line that now is a wild horse that is difficult to keep a seat on.
deb

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much

reply by Deejharrington on 25-May-2010

you're welcome
deb

Comment from patmedium

Excellent

Adina, this is lovely. I wondered what a prompt without rules would net me? Answer? This clever flight. I like the multiple negative at the end, too. Good luck in the voting booths tomorrow. Pat. xx

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks Pat, i was really happy to see the contest

Adina

reply by patmedium on 25-May-2010

XXX

Comment from Gideon Roth

Excellent

Yet another great submissions You definitely have a talent with descriptive writing as exemplified in these lines:
I walked endlessly round and round with my thoughts flashing vaults of lightning on my cortex until I became flooded with memories.
Keep up the good work and best of success with your future submissions...Gideon

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thank you so much Gideon, your words are music to my ears

Adina

Comment from highlander104

Excellent

Your story of being trapped by a migrain hits home for me. I used to let my mind wander so that I could relax as much as the headache would permit. The flashes of light would turn into journeys that allowed my mind to leave the migrain--but not the pain.

Excellent write. Good luck in the contest.

Jean K.

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much Jean, your input is appreciated

Comment from Awatef

Excellent

This is truly an amazing piece of writing. It was very interesting to read and informative. I enjoyed reading this story, very sophisticated.

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thanks so much

Comment from plum145

Excellent

very interesting story line.
I work with clearing my memories to help manage my stress levels and so can relate to your thought process.
I would like the see this story expanded on. I think it has the potential to make a larger impact on the reader because the concept is a valid one and a very useful tool to help people in their lives.

thank you for sharing

good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 25-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

thank you so much