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Men from Mars~Women from Venus

Just a Silly Fictional about not wanting to be opposite sex

50 total reviews 
Comment from Neonewman
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This was incredible, Debi. I love that you didn't spell P----. This had me roaring with laughter. This was done in a great style, and I am happy you jumped on board.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Awe Steve, you say the sweetest things. LOL. I love to make people laugh in one way or another. Thanks for making my day with your fun review and comments. You're the best! Love, Debi
reply by Neonewman on 16-Mar-2025
    It's always a pleasure, Debi.
Comment from Sanku
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Men are men and women are women .I wouldt understand this dialogue about equal/stronger/ weaker theories. Nature has given both the sexes equal important .In Hinduism God Shiva is represented as half woman half man .It mean without one the other cannot exist...
i loved this Debi.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Santha, you are a sweetheart. I am delighted that you liked this one. I just didn't feel comfortable about writing about being a man, and so I must have changed the poem fifty times to try to show it.

    However, I loved learning about the Hinduism God Shiva. It is close to what we believe in theory, except in physical strength I still need my hubby to open my jars. LOL

    Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and for the glorious six stars. I appreciate you so much, my beautiful friend.
    Thanks again!! Love, Debi
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi.
I like this humorous poem about how opposites attract and about not wanting to be male. I agree with you.
I like how you rhyme everything with Venus and Mars when showing the opposites as you used pink and blue to show male and female. And the last to be in red for love.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a nice day.
Joan

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Awe Joan, thank you. We are so happy just the way we are, so we don't feel the need to change anything. Thanks for the fun and kind comments, my dear friend.
    Thanks again; love, Debi
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Mar-2025
    Don't mention it, Debi. That is the way true love is supposed to be.
    Joan
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Hi I am glad you finally come to terms with yourself and find joy in what you are and what your husband is.
Whether you want to be a Venus or a Martian you will be the loser in something somewhere. Let us say the best is to stay put and enjoy what nature has to give.

Benny

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Haha, thanks so much, Benny. We are so happy just the way we are so we don't feel the need to change anything. Thanks for the fun comments, my dear friend.
    Thanks again; love, Debi
reply by Benny Beeharry on 15-Mar-2025
    Happy to hear you are happy

    Benny
Comment from jaded831
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I never understood why people can't accept who they are, your poem establishes that well. You put a bit of sexual overtone and made the read fun. Thanks again for a wonderful read.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Thanks Sweetie, we are so happy just the way we are so we don't feel the need to change anything. Thanks for the fun comments, my dear friend.
    Thanks again; love, Debi
Comment from ESOSTINE
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I love the analogy you employed in the poem, the comparison of man to Mars and woman to Venus. The subtle naughtiness in the poem shows how gifted you are in the business of writing. I am sure your hubby will love to read this. Well done, dear Debi.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Awe Esostine, I worried about that one line but no body complained. We are so happy just the way we are so we don't feel the need to change anything. Thanks for the fun comments, my dear friend. I appreciate you so much.
    Love, Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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good entry for the contest. I like how you frame the differences between men and women and I like how you draw a comparison between your husband and you. like the last lines the best. as a French wit once put it,

men and women are different, viva la difference

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Hi Jake, we are so happy just the way we are so we don't feel the need to change anything. Thanks for the fun comments, my dear friend.
    Thanks again; love, Debi
Comment from royowen
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I agree, I'm so happy that my wife and daughters are one hundred percent women, in love and glad to be wives and mums, and I'm so glad that they, and that I'm a man, and really happy to be a dad, husband and grandpa. Beautifully written dear Debi, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Hi Roy, we are so happy just the way we are so we don't feel the need to change anything. Thanks for the awesome comments, my dear friend.
    Thanks again; love, Debi
reply by royowen on 15-Mar-2025
    Exactly
Comment from bob cullen
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I always had my doubts about you, Debi, and this poem certainly confirms those thoughts. Crazy, with a capital C. But oh, so talented. If I'm honest, I actually loved this.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Haha, Bob, that is me, Crazy. But I am still happy to be a woman and not a man. I am way too sentimental to be the one who is so serious and has to take care of me. LOL.
    Thanks for the awesome and fun review, comments and Crazy Stars to swing on. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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What a catchy poem.
And your husband is probably glad you lack a p___s. It would just get in the way. (smiley face here)
I'll bet Bing's voice rings even when he burps.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    You are absolutely right, Wayne. We wouldn't know what to do with each other. (Big Wink and Smiley face back atcha!) We kinda like it the way it is.

    Thanks for this awesome review and fun comments, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi