Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was very funny, Debi. The Thelma and Louise premise gave a visual and the last line drove the point. (No pun intended.) Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025

Awe, Gretchen, you are so sweet. thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T & L. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Debi, This is a very cute and well written rhyming poem about Thelma and Louise finding Fan Story. You used great descriptive rhyming words and very cute imagery from the artwork you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025

Oh Teri, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T & L. I appreciate the six stars so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

Comment from jaded831

Exceptional

Your poem made me laugh. Rhyming gave it that light touch. Everyone here at Fanstory can relate. I use poetry to help me deal with life, and your well written, fun poem put a spark into my day.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025

Hi Jaded, gosh, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L. I appreciate the six stars so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

Comment from Harry Craft

Excellent

Lol! This poem made me laugh Debi. I truly enjoyed reading this poem since I saw the movie. I liked the rhymig scheme and the photo goes great with the poem as well. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025

Harry, gosh, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.

Thank you again, so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

reply by Harry Craft on 04-Mar-2025

You are so welcome Debi!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening verses about
their decision to take the right path,
and "clean the slate."
-I like how you have them join FS
and looked forward to a new start.
-I like the verse when they talk
about rhyme and crime.
-A good like about the "paper and trail."
-A good conclusion as they finished
their book of fiction.
-A clever idea. Very well done.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025

Hi Pam, you are so sweet and thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T & L. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Mar-2025

You are very welcome, Debi. I appreciate you, too.

Comment from Arabellesmom

Excellent

Hi there I enjoyed your poem because obviously the names Thelma and Louise and very grabbing. You're a great writer. Your poem is silly and awesome!! Like it a lot

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025

Hi Arabellesmom, and her mom is also so sweet. Thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T & L. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is a well-written poem that appeals to a wide audience. Great use of rhyme and meter.
The light blue background contributes to the attractive presentation you created.
Favorite lines:
Louise said I hope it's no crime
I mostly love to write in rhyme

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025

Awe Crystie, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

Now I know that you are having fun .How did you your appointment go? Surgery date fixed?This was fun .You tried to make Thelma and Luis straiht by enlisting them in fs. Hope their fall from cliff didnt hrt them .We want them here..LOL

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025

Hahaha, yes, it gets me out of any dark places by writing fun things.
Appointment was not the greatest as there is still too much inflammation and a new infection starting, so they increased the steroids and antibiotics and prescribed enough for two more months. I have been on them almost straight thru the last seven months.
Anyway it looks like it may be the lupus that is hurting it. So they are talking about other ways they could try to help me.
I will know more at the end of the month for my next appointment.

So, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

The idea of being writers and going straight sounded like a really good one to them. But are you saying they found it such hard work that they drove right off a cliff? Surely it didn't end as badly as the movie.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025

Haha, Carol, no, it's really hard to put it into a poem and still get all those crime words in. But here is the last stanza. It was trying to say they wrote a book and they worked hard at it and they wrote the girls off a cliff.

They'd catch onto the book fiction
They'd write "Two Girls and Conviction"
But worked till their fingers were stiff
And wrote both girls right off a cliff

Thanks for the sweet review, hon. I always appreciate you.
Love, Debi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Aww, I hope the fall did not cause too much harm,
I was just getting set to enjoy their charm.
I will always welcome gals of this type,
Women who do not require any hype.
They entertain with their savoir faire,
The poems they compose, beyond compare.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025

Hey Sweetie, thank you for this sweet review. I have just been in a different mood today so am going from one extreme to another.
I appreciate the kind words for this one, bro. Lotsa love, Debi