A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Sankey
Yet another excellent tour through a wonderful story. This is going really well. I can't wait to see where it is all heading. Keep up the great work. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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Yet another excellent tour through a wonderful story. This is going really well. I can't wait to see where it is all heading. Keep up the great work. Well done!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from patcelaw
This was a distinct pleasure to listen to as it flows very well when it is being read aloud. I wish you the very best with your writing. I'll also wish you a very wonderful week. And may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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This was a distinct pleasure to listen to as it flows very well when it is being read aloud. I wish you the very best with your writing. I'll also wish you a very wonderful week. And may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love your new story.... it's very romantic in an innocent way.... old fashioned.
Dr Tyler sounds like the perfect man. It's hard to believe there are men like him in our days.
Interesting characters and plot.
Well done
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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I love your new story.... it's very romantic in an innocent way.... old fashioned.
Dr Tyler sounds like the perfect man. It's hard to believe there are men like him in our days.
Interesting characters and plot.
Well done
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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I think there are men like him, but they're hard to find because they remain in the background. Thank you for the kind review.
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Can you send one my way lol
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I wish it were that easy.
Comment from Jacob1395
I was not expecting Rebekah to be pregnant. I'm so glad for her that she has found Tyler now and I can see already that he is going to take really good care of her. I really enjoyed this chapter, Barbara, I can't wait to read the next one.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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I was not expecting Rebekah to be pregnant. I'm so glad for her that she has found Tyler now and I can see already that he is going to take really good care of her. I really enjoyed this chapter, Barbara, I can't wait to read the next one.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from lyenochka
Rebeka must really be very old-fashioned to not even notice her handsome host. It's good that she didn't end up in the hospitality of someone with evil intentions like her agent! Now we know more about her background and the good doctor will know how to gain her trust and advocate for her. It's clear whom we are rooting for!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Rebeka must really be very old-fashioned to not even notice her handsome host. It's good that she didn't end up in the hospitality of someone with evil intentions like her agent! Now we know more about her background and the good doctor will know how to gain her trust and advocate for her. It's clear whom we are rooting for!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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More about Rebeka is still to be revealed. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Ooh! You hit me with a surprising uppercut. I did not see that one coming.I am all in on this one already. Something tells me that Mr. Stuart is in for a difficult time, one he did not count on having. I hope that Rebeka and Doctor Tyler rake him over the coals.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Ooh! You hit me with a surprising uppercut. I did not see that one coming.I am all in on this one already. Something tells me that Mr. Stuart is in for a difficult time, one he did not count on having. I hope that Rebeka and Doctor Tyler rake him over the coals.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. We'll see what happens.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a really great chapter. All the characters are so believable. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue between Tyler and Rebeka. This is going to be another really great novel my friend. I didn't see any errors. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Barbara, This is a really great chapter. All the characters are so believable. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue between Tyler and Rebeka. This is going to be another really great novel my friend. I didn't see any errors. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
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I am looking forward to reading it!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a gorgeous pic! Rebekah is clearly a very strong, disciplined young woman and we can't help but trust her version of what happened, given her very proper way of dealing with her host. Likewise, Tyler seems the true gent and professional. The scene in the beginning is a great chapter opener which could have been very embarrassing for both but, surprisingly not so. Thereafter, your story develops with excellent dialogue and pace and an interesting scenario unfolding with much potential for emotion and drama to follow. Well done, Barbara. Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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What a gorgeous pic! Rebekah is clearly a very strong, disciplined young woman and we can't help but trust her version of what happened, given her very proper way of dealing with her host. Likewise, Tyler seems the true gent and professional. The scene in the beginning is a great chapter opener which could have been very embarrassing for both but, surprisingly not so. Thereafter, your story develops with excellent dialogue and pace and an interesting scenario unfolding with much potential for emotion and drama to follow. Well done, Barbara. Debbie
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Paul McFarland
There are a lot of things happening in this post, Barb. My idea of what is to come has changed quite a bit. Looking forward to your following chapters.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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There are a lot of things happening in this post, Barb. My idea of what is to come has changed quite a bit. Looking forward to your following chapters.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mistydawn
That was a little under 1500 words? It was so interesting, engaging that I didn't realize it. That would be a heck of a way to start the day for either party, lol. Tyler seems really concerned about her. Is he starting to have feelings for her, hmm. If it were up to Amber, they'd already be together. Maybe her gentle nudging will help. Your story is very well written, interesting. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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That was a little under 1500 words? It was so interesting, engaging that I didn't realize it. That would be a heck of a way to start the day for either party, lol. Tyler seems really concerned about her. Is he starting to have feelings for her, hmm. If it were up to Amber, they'd already be together. Maybe her gentle nudging will help. Your story is very well written, interesting. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
