Comment from teafor2

Excellent

DonandVicki, I am just a tad confuse, but will review this anyhow, because
I believe this is a pious premise which has excellent merit. IMHO, one of the greatest GIFTS, God gave man is FREEWILL...What he decides to do with it, is a completely different story. teafor2

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025

Seems like you've got it, no confusion there.

reply by teafor2 on 30-Jan-2025

I mean about the contest entry or lack thereof...

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Your sentiments sound familiar, Don, to another of your posts, I think:) I like the concept of free will so that man can stand or fall. It's a shame you couldn't fit this into a min(ute) contest because it's clearly a theme which is well portrayed here. Thanks for sharing, Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025

Thank you so much, Debbie.

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Don,

This is a great poem. God did create man and then gives us free will.

This is well organized and flows well.

I thought about entering the minute contest, but I can't meet the rhyme requirement either. I am a work in progress.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025

Thank you so much Cecilia, you are a good friend.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 30-Jan-2025

You're welcome. I am glad we are friends. How are the fires in Cali? I don't have cable, so I have no idea what's going on.

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025

We had a fire one half mile from here last week, but the firefighters got on it so quick only 1 acre was burned. We have had some rain, so it helps.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 30-Jan-2025

Oh, I bet that was scary. Praying for you and California.