Our prayer
We are well betrayed11 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I had a good laugh reading your poem! I wasn't expecting this! The playful twist on the Lord's Prayer is so creative. I really love the humor but ther eis also a touch of frustration - it's like you made a tough situation feel light hearted. The rhyming is smooth. Your poem makes me smile while also thinking about some real challenges people face. Keep writing - your wit is soooo sharp - and your voice shines through!
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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I had a good laugh reading your poem! I wasn't expecting this! The playful twist on the Lord's Prayer is so creative. I really love the humor but ther eis also a touch of frustration - it's like you made a tough situation feel light hearted. The rhyming is smooth. Your poem makes me smile while also thinking about some real challenges people face. Keep writing - your wit is soooo sharp - and your voice shines through!
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thanks Michael for the great review. Much appreciated. Jen.
