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My Last Arrest . . . I Hope

The more things change the more they stay the same

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed your story! The way you captured the chaos of the situation - especially with the lazy security guard 0 had me laughing. Your sense of humor shines through. It's clear you have a knack for making even the tough stuff entertaining. I can tell you've been through a lot, but you still manage to bring a lightness to it. Keep up the great work - you've got a real gift for storytelling!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
    Thank you! Your words are appreciated!!!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Thanks for your service rendered. What branch? Non-com or officer? How long? Where were you stationed?
As for the story, it kept me interested from start to finish. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
    USMC 5 years Camp Lejeune mostly.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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I don't doubt for one minute the duplicity and hypocrisy of management praising and condemning the same actions.
And for 'Stevie Security'...
Well written. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
    Thanks, Wayne!
Comment from Karen Cherry
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Good story.I would have told them You were not hired to do that job.
And the incompetnet folks they hired for security did not do their jobs. And, if you have to do their jobs too, you should get their pay. Just saying...

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
    You are a tigress!
reply by Karen Cherry on 17-Feb-2025
reply by Karen Cherry on 17-Feb-2025
    I fight for my friends. You are my friend. I really like that froggy picture. He looks so intelligent. :-)