Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Antonio's determination against Cornelius is so well told. I could almost feel the tension crackling between them. The contrast between Grayson's charm and Eleanor's distrust builds the mystery even more. Your characters are interesting and keeping me hooked. You've set up a world brimming with secrets. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Antonio's determination against Cornelius is so well told. I could almost feel the tension crackling between them. The contrast between Grayson's charm and Eleanor's distrust builds the mystery even more. Your characters are interesting and keeping me hooked. You've set up a world brimming with secrets. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank, Michawl. I am thrilled to see you returning and enjoying the story. It's a bit more complicated than the other ones, but I think we can work our way through it, especially when every thing ties together... Thanks again.
Smiles, Carol
