The Kirby Case - Part 1
A detective attempts to find a serial killer32 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story poem, The Kirby Case Part 1, introduces this murder case in such a way as to pull the readers in for the ride to find the killer of women in Kirby Field.
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This story poem, The Kirby Case Part 1, introduces this murder case in such a way as to pull the readers in for the ride to find the killer of women in Kirby Field.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The way you wrote this was really well done, and pulls the reader straight in. Is it a true story? It doesn't matter if it is fiction the writing crime story in poetry is very clever. I'm off to read part two now! Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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The way you wrote this was really well done, and pulls the reader straight in. Is it a true story? It doesn't matter if it is fiction the writing crime story in poetry is very clever. I'm off to read part two now! Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is a well written story in poetic form and I enjoyed listening to it. I'm not a big fan of murder stories however. May you have a wonderful day and I wish you the very best with your writing. God bless. Patricia.
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This is a well written story in poetic form and I enjoyed listening to it. I'm not a big fan of murder stories however. May you have a wonderful day and I wish you the very best with your writing. God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
I went looking on google for the Kirby killings but although I found some, they weren't identical to your story, this is beautifully written as always Pam, great meter and rhyme, and excellent language, well done, blessings Roy
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I went looking on google for the Kirby killings but although I found some, they weren't identical to your story, this is beautifully written as always Pam, great meter and rhyme, and excellent language, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Ulla
Wow, I'm intrigued, Pam. I think this is the first time that I have read a crime story in poetic form. It's something else and you do it so very well. I can't wait to be reading on. Ulla xcx
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Wow, I'm intrigued, Pam. I think this is the first time that I have read a crime story in poetic form. It's something else and you do it so very well. I can't wait to be reading on. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
I don't know if this story is based on a true case, but true or not, you have done a phenomenal job telling the story in rhyme. I enjoy reading mysteries, so I know I'm in for and enjoyable time reading. Well done.
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I don't know if this story is based on a true case, but true or not, you have done a phenomenal job telling the story in rhyme. I enjoy reading mysteries, so I know I'm in for and enjoyable time reading. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness you had a serial killer on the loose Pam? How very terrifying for women. I am not sure if this is old news or not, but I hope he was caught. A chilling poem with great rhymes and metre, love Dolly x x x
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Oh my goodness you had a serial killer on the loose Pam? How very terrifying for women. I am not sure if this is old news or not, but I hope he was caught. A chilling poem with great rhymes and metre, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a case not known to us in the UK but what a great job you've done here, in verse, bringing us up to date! Horrendous but the fact that he leaves the bodies in the same place must mean that the authorities could set up surveillance cameras etc? Criminals are so often creatures of habit and the longer they get away with things, the more careless they become. Thank you for sharing your excellent and informative post, Pam. Take care Debbie
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This is a case not known to us in the UK but what a great job you've done here, in verse, bringing us up to date! Horrendous but the fact that he leaves the bodies in the same place must mean that the authorities could set up surveillance cameras etc? Criminals are so often creatures of habit and the longer they get away with things, the more careless they become. Thank you for sharing your excellent and informative post, Pam. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I read this out of order, not sure how that happened. I just went back and checked, because I started at the top of my PM box instead of the back. Okay makes sense. I am enjoying this poetic mystery.
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I read this out of order, not sure how that happened. I just went back and checked, because I started at the top of my PM box instead of the back. Okay makes sense. I am enjoying this poetic mystery.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Sugarray77
This is very unique Pam... a murder mystery inside an ongoing series of poems... you have done a fantastic job with the sequence of the plot, rhyme choices and the story line. Great job.
Melissa
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This is very unique Pam... a murder mystery inside an ongoing series of poems... you have done a fantastic job with the sequence of the plot, rhyme choices and the story line. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
