A Tragic Day In My Life
A true story about an accident.15 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry
That was a shocking tail. No one needs to have that experience. But, when everyone is once again safe, It does remind us how fragile life is. I am sure Chris got hugged more than a hotel room pillow that day. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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That was a shocking tail. No one needs to have that experience. But, when everyone is once again safe, It does remind us how fragile life is. I am sure Chris got hugged more than a hotel room pillow that day. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Karen, thank you for your great review. It was like a bad dream.
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:-)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Brenda,
This story was gripping and the anxiety ran high. It's amazing how quick a situation can turn deadly. I am so glad Richard acted quickly and save your little man. God is good.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Brenda,
This story was gripping and the anxiety ran high. It's amazing how quick a situation can turn deadly. I am so glad Richard acted quickly and save your little man. God is good.
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your great review.
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You're welcome my friend
Comment from Wendy G
That was very close. Just as well it all ended okay, and I presume the dog was found as well. It was certainly a day filled with drama. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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That was very close. Just as well it all ended okay, and I presume the dog was found as well. It was certainly a day filled with drama. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This was an interesting story to read. With the various groups of people and cars, I'm not sure I would have been able to explain it all as clearly as you did. I'm so glad everyone was okay although it was a frightful close call. Rain makes these things more difficult to begin with, too. Best wishes. You have a good content entry.
Alex
One note:
Richard knew he had only (one) chance to save Chris.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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This was an interesting story to read. With the various groups of people and cars, I'm not sure I would have been able to explain it all as clearly as you did. I'm so glad everyone was okay although it was a frightful close call. Rain makes these things more difficult to begin with, too. Best wishes. You have a good content entry.
Alex
One note:
Richard knew he had only (one) chance to save Chris.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your very nice review. Also, thank you for pointing out the error. It was hard to write.
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You're welcome. I could understand that. As an Empath, it is so very difficult for me to write about anything so emotional. And even with that against you, you excelled to share the story so well. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a heart-pounding story! I really appreciate how you shared the emotions of the moment. I could feel your panic, see Richard's quick thinking, and feel the shock of it all. Thank goodness Richard was there to save Chris! What a remarkable moment of courage.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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What a heart-pounding story! I really appreciate how you shared the emotions of the moment. I could feel your panic, see Richard's quick thinking, and feel the shock of it all. Thank goodness Richard was there to save Chris! What a remarkable moment of courage.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
