Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Ulla
Aw, Carol, so you are back with a crime story where Eleanor will get again have a major role. I sure like that.
Now, as for the crash, I think it's appalling. What about all the poor kids? No sixes left. Will have to wait for Sunday. Lots of love, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Aw, Carol, so you are back with a crime story where Eleanor will get again have a major role. I sure like that.
Now, as for the crash, I think it's appalling. What about all the poor kids? No sixes left. Will have to wait for Sunday. Lots of love, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Ulla. I am feeling so good as the new year begins and I've had so much support from my FanStory friends that I'm glowing from ear to ear. Thank you for jumping on board with Eleanor and the gang.... it should be a wild ride. Thank you.....
Love ya, Carol
Comment from Sugarray77
You always do such a good job of keeping the story interesting. Also, the dialogue comes across as real and keeps a steady rhythm in the repartee'. Interesting and the closing sequence keeps us wanting to read more. Well done, Carol.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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You always do such a good job of keeping the story interesting. Also, the dialogue comes across as real and keeps a steady rhythm in the repartee'. Interesting and the closing sequence keeps us wanting to read more. Well done, Carol.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I appreciate your thoughts on my use of dialogue, Melissa, because I like to use it to move the stories forward with a little more connection with the characters. Knowing you enjoyed it means a lot.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
The story continues, in a new book. It's interesting that Miriam also has premonitions. I hope that she is able to shed some light on the person/people who helped Doyle and Rossi escape. Good dialogue in this chapter. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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The story continues, in a new book. It's interesting that Miriam also has premonitions. I hope that she is able to shed some light on the person/people who helped Doyle and Rossi escape. Good dialogue in this chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Miriam's premonitions involve the mansion, mainly because she was innocent when she was hung by the town folks. Having Rebecca return and Miriam communicating with the living makes waves in the spiritual world. There's going to be a lot happening. Hope you enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
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I'll fasten my seatbelt! LOL. Looking forward to it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh boy! Here we go! This sounds like another awesome adventure for the ghost detective. You have been so busy writing lately! I hope to be back to writing soon but I am still recovering from pneumonia.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Oh boy! Here we go! This sounds like another awesome adventure for the ghost detective. You have been so busy writing lately! I hope to be back to writing soon but I am still recovering from pneumonia.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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I am so sorry to hear you aren't well yet. I remember when I had pneumonia; it was bad. My lungs refused to clear up. I will keep you in my thoughts and prayers so you will be back making me laugh (or scaring the you-know-what out of me very soon. Happy New Year, Marilyn. I hope this year brings nothing but joy and happiness.
Love ya, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What a great segue from your short stories to the new book. I really do admire your writing it seems absolutely effortless. Great start of the new book can't wait for more.
Excellent job my friend
Love ya,
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Carol,
What a great segue from your short stories to the new book. I really do admire your writing it seems absolutely effortless. Great start of the new book can't wait for more.
Excellent job my friend
Love ya,
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much. I was hoping that I could tie in the short stories in the prologue so when I move to the first chapter the reader has some idea even though they might not have read the short stories. I've written chapter One so we are ready to go.
Thanks as always for your generous stars!
Love ya, Carol
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You're welcome my sweet friend. I have faith that you will make it number one again.
Love ya lots
Comment from patcelaw
This is extremely well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is very good structure and paragraphing are excellent. Your punctuation is spot on and it
makes it so that it is a very pleasant piece to listen to. happy new year. Patricia
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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This is extremely well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is very good structure and paragraphing are excellent. Your punctuation is spot on and it
makes it so that it is a very pleasant piece to listen to. happy new year. Patricia
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Patricia. I am thrilled that you enjoyed the story and ll your compliments make me so happy. Have great day nd take care.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Welcome back Eleanor and gang! Another good plot ahead of us. I wonder what the Chinese is coming up? Mind you, they are into everything. At least the gang are together now, and Garth and Matthew are getting on at last. That will help things in this story. Great beginning, my frind. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Welcome back Eleanor and gang! Another good plot ahead of us. I wonder what the Chinese is coming up? Mind you, they are into everything. At least the gang are together now, and Garth and Matthew are getting on at last. That will help things in this story. Great beginning, my frind. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Not giving too many hints way but try and remember when Doyle was arrested on the yacht when Megan and the other girls were being sold in the slave trafficking. All the foreign ambassadors etc were released but their countries recieved full documentation, destroying some lives. Enogh!!!! Thanks as always,
Carol
