2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Your picture, as always is a thing of beauty all by itself. The font is well chosen. You write of a deeply felt yearning. All kudos to you. Enjoy the new year. Karen
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Your picture, as always is a thing of beauty all by itself. The font is well chosen. You write of a deeply felt yearning. All kudos to you. Enjoy the new year. Karen
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from RJ Heritage
A fascinating tree, the Weeping Willow. I like standing under them and pondering why it is they seem to weep.Perhaps like us, there are deep rooted issues that are yet to be resolved. Beautiful and nostalgic post, at least for me.
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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A fascinating tree, the Weeping Willow. I like standing under them and pondering why it is they seem to weep.Perhaps like us, there are deep rooted issues that are yet to be resolved. Beautiful and nostalgic post, at least for me.
RJ
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
It's sad when the roots are deep in sorrow. Some people are like that - they can't get over some deep hurt or grief from the past and won't reach out to fresh new perspectives to grow anew. Well done with your haiku!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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It's sad when the roots are deep in sorrow. Some people are like that - they can't get over some deep hurt or grief from the past and won't reach out to fresh new perspectives to grow anew. Well done with your haiku!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, big sister. I am sorry it took so long. I haven't been in fanstory a lot lately.
Love
marival
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Your blue themed poem has good phrasing and artwork. Yes, sometimes the sunset has that blue haze.
Another good addition to your book.
Best wishes for a happy, healthy New Year.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Gypsy,
Your blue themed poem has good phrasing and artwork. Yes, sometimes the sunset has that blue haze.
Another good addition to your book.
Best wishes for a happy, healthy New Year.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I really like the all-round sadness of this haiku, weeping, alone, and sorrow, the dark presentation it is a wonderful presentation, very well written, "5/7/5 Poem
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku" this is where I got confused
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Excellent, I really like the all-round sadness of this haiku, weeping, alone, and sorrow, the dark presentation it is a wonderful presentation, very well written, "5/7/5 Poem
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku" this is where I got confused
****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
I like the linking together of the weeping with the deep roots of sorrow, and also the sense of aloneness experienced by the tree - which can easily represent our life experiences. Beautifully presented.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I like the linking together of the weeping with the deep roots of sorrow, and also the sense of aloneness experienced by the tree - which can easily represent our life experiences. Beautifully presented.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
What a beautiful Haiku. Where do you come up with all your great idea. You are the Haiku Queen. I love the picture. I love a weeping willow.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
What a beautiful Haiku. Where do you come up with all your great idea. You are the Haiku Queen. I love the picture. I love a weeping willow.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I get my ideas from my imagination. Sometimes I look at a picture and feel inspired. I love haiku, it's a beautiful poetic form.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My muse is being elusive these days. Too much noise in my background.
Comment from RodG
I have a great fondness for weeping willow trees. I can easily visualize this one standing alone near a pond. I really like how you combine "sorrow" and "weeping" to suggest a great sadness that could affect us all. Rod
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I have a great fondness for weeping willow trees. I can easily visualize this one standing alone near a pond. I really like how you combine "sorrow" and "weeping" to suggest a great sadness that could affect us all. Rod
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely imagery and personification in this blue-tinted verse about the weeping willow, forever sad. I like the idea of its "roots deep in sorrow." Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Lovely imagery and personification in this blue-tinted verse about the weeping willow, forever sad. I like the idea of its "roots deep in sorrow." Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
