Mother Earth
A Nature Tanka for the club challenge18 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very astute verse that is also an admonishment to humanity for their blindness and arrogance. Your foray into the WAKA poems has been interesting. Keep up the good work, Kim.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is a very astute verse that is also an admonishment to humanity for their blindness and arrogance. Your foray into the WAKA poems has been interesting. Keep up the good work, Kim.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Melissa, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I think God is so much more than being useful, I don't understand why people don't seek Him, I did before I actually knew He existed, and He came to me eventually, which is the way it is, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I think God is so much more than being useful, I don't understand why people don't seek Him, I did before I actually knew He existed, and He came to me eventually, which is the way it is, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Roy, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi kahpot, a most sincere and
caring tanka about our poor
beleaguered Earth. She is
crying out for more help from
humankind. My heart breaks.
That's why I belong to
Greenpeace and Defenders of
Wildlife. Blessings to you!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hi kahpot, a most sincere and
caring tanka about our poor
beleaguered Earth. She is
crying out for more help from
humankind. My heart breaks.
That's why I belong to
Greenpeace and Defenders of
Wildlife. Blessings to you!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much, and good on you for working towards this problem, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are responsible as humans for our planet as we are the most intelligent beings, but I question our loyalty in this regard and I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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We are responsible as humans for our planet as we are the most intelligent beings, but I question our loyalty in this regard and I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This Tanka addresses Mother Earth and asks poignant questions about why humankind denies the usefulness of the world's resources. After she has protected and nurtured us for centuries we turn our backs on her and destroy what is left of the world as we know it.
Well done! Keep addressing the way we overuse the world and its resources.
Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This Tanka addresses Mother Earth and asks poignant questions about why humankind denies the usefulness of the world's resources. After she has protected and nurtured us for centuries we turn our backs on her and destroy what is left of the world as we know it.
Well done! Keep addressing the way we overuse the world and its resources.
Jesse
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Jesse yes, I think it is a very important subject, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Yes, the environment is important to us all.
Jesse
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written in an interesting format and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best in the club event. May you have a wonderful day and may your new year be blessed. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is very nicely written in an interesting format and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best in the club event. May you have a wonderful day and may your new year be blessed. Patricia.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kahpot,
This is a wonderful poem. It is amazing that people don't think about the earth and all it has done for us. It's a shame really. The picture compliments the poem.
Well done
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Kahpot,
This is a wonderful poem. It is amazing that people don't think about the earth and all it has done for us. It's a shame really. The picture compliments the poem.
Well done
Cecilia
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia, for your wonderful comments, yes, people should care more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I give to you an extra star for you light shines bright whenever you write.
The ideal within this short piece causes one to muse their fate being just a speck of dust on our earthen disc.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I give to you an extra star for you light shines bright whenever you write.
The ideal within this short piece causes one to muse their fate being just a speck of dust on our earthen disc.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Tom, for your exceptional rating and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
